Love or True love

by David

Read and find out soon how you feel
If its true love or just love
it'll tell you exactly if its real

Love is often in the air
Yet True love owns your heart
Love always comes together
Yet True love never falls apart

Love ignores all the lies
Yet True love knows the truth
Love is the reason
Yet True love is the proof

Love keeps you warm at night
Yet True love keeps you awake
Love is real, what you see
Yet True love is never fake

 

Submission date : 2007-04-08
Last edit : 2007-04-12

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Airika ( P C ) at 2007-10-12

Thats good =]
5/5

Khanyisile Cele at 2007-10-18

That was well said. And it is all true. Well done.

Stephanie Byram at 2007-10-25

True, very true

Hannah Hiding behind my mask ( P ) at 2007-11-14

I love this poem and the more poems i read by you the more i relise wot i should be saying

Hannah x x x

ben thompson ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-09

Very nice write my friend. a very heart touching piece. 5/5 best wishes ben thompson



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