What is This?

by Kalee

Why do I feel this way?
Why is it that no matter what I do
You are always in my head?
Day after day, I cant seem to get you out.

It doesnt matter if I am with my friends
Or during an exam
I think of you day and night
No matter what

What am I supposed to do?
I have tried to forget you, but that hasnt worked
I have tried to tell myself that you are no good for me
That only made you run through my mind more


I wish I didnt feel like this
But I do
And I dont know what it is I am feeling
It is strange to me

Is it love, what I am feeling?

 

Submission date : 2007-04-14
Last edit : 2007-04-16

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Latest comments

Pain in the Darkness ( F P C ) at 2007-04-17

Wow...this is really good poem, but this is how I feel. my opinion is there is no love. yeah...good job.

holly at 2007-04-18

Pretty, it speaks

WANNAbe Juliet ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-19

It could use editing, yes . Was it bad? No . The feeling that is felt in the poem is right there; it speaks to you . I`m not a fan of this poem, but it was good .
..__MiNDYY

Ashleigh Skye ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-21

Aw this poem is so sweet, and yeah thats definatly love.. or it could be a really strong crush im not to sure. Whatever it is.. I really liked the poem idea, VERY creative you got a lot out there without having to say very much. Nice work.

Fire-lilly ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-03

Not bad though I do thin kthat it could be better if you were to work on it a little. Keep up the great work. 4/5



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