The Perfect Guy

by BeautifulxMess

Slowly drifting away into your everlasting eyes.
Looking into emerald diamonds that shine so bright.
Your long black eyelashes raise to the blue skies.
The color of love glazes my way into the dark night.

Skin so soft caress my body into an ecstasy.
Silky as satin brushes across my bare face.
Breathtaking as your touch thats like a fantasy.
It comforts me when I feel out of place.

Lips sweet as candy that long to always satisfy.
A bittersweet sugar rush races through my veins.
Tongue tied words that soar my wings to fly.
A soft touch lessens away all my pain.

If only I could describe everything about you.
I'd go on forever because it could never die.
All I know is that I have a love that is true.
Everything about you makes you the perfect guy.

 

Submission date : 2007-04-16
Last edit : 2007-04-24

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Latest comments

ctmskh ( F P ) at 2007-08-04

Nice choice of words. the poem flows smoothly and shows good emotion. keep it up.. 5/5

ctmskh

mohamad aref ( F C ) at 2007-10-24

Your poems are really awsome

InvisiblyBroken15 ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-10

Love the ending to this poem... very nice.

from beggining to end it was amazing.i give you a 5/5.

keep it up! =]

LiisaMariie143 ( P C ) at 2008-04-10

Goshh you have really good love poemsss. i like them alott. good job.

Lost and Confused ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-13

Very enticing poem. I'm not into guys, but if I was... that would be excellent. The way you make the reader see your vision is extraordinary. I was completely lost in the amazing write. Good flow, great word usage, and the concept was beautiful... 5/5



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