One More Forever

by Live WeLL

Perfection together ,Emptiness apart
We knew this was coming right from the start.

Just one more kiss, just one more touch
That's all I ask. Is that too much?

Please hold that second, just for a while
Freeze time so I could forever look at your smile.

A little while longer, I can't go just yet
Let me capture this moment I will never forget.

Hold me closer, tighter, and never let me go.
If time must continue, please I beg it go slow.

Babe theres no rush..for now im right here
For time and its quickness are all that i fear.

One more day? One more month? One more year? NO
It's just not enough. One more forever, and then I will go.

Written for that special someone.. before I leave for College.


Submission date : 2007-05-22
Last edit : 2007-08-21

Visits : 1602
Votes : 7
Rating : 5.0

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Tim Mauntler ( F P C ) at 2007-06-05

GREAT POEM!!! Did you show that special person this poem? If you have, I'm sure they loved it...

ItsLoVe SwEetEstLOve ( F P C ) at 2008-02-29

Wow... this got me special... sure do feel special reading this.

Raindrops ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-14

Dang straight one more forever is all i ask sometimes too nice job 5/5

Andrew ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-03

Nice poem, keep it up

Andrew ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-03

Nice poem, keep it up

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