How Much Would You Say?

by Live WeLL

How much would you say?
How far would you go?
How much would you do?
For the one you love so?

One a cold winter night
Would you walk a whole mile?
..feet covered in snow,..
Just to see his smile?

On a nice sunny day
would staying in be your choice?
Just talking on the phone
to hear the sound of his voice?

When your tired and worn
would you stay up all night..
watching him sleep..
because he's such a beautiful sight?

Would you fly across the world
So that you can feel safe
Because inside his arms
is your favorite place?

Would you go to the extreme
or way past the limit..
so he could be happy
just as you wished it?

Would you change all your thoughts..
opinions and views?
If he asked you to..
would you not even refuse?

Would you suffer through the pain..
of beatings and fights?
And cry yourself to sleep
all those long, lonely nights?

So as you think about love
keep this in mind..
Let everything out..
don't keep anything behind..

How much would you say?
How far would you go?
How much would you do?
For the one you love so?



Submission date : 2007-05-24

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claire ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-10

This is a great poem - amazing ideas, like always!!! good rhyming n stuff - ur always a great writer! i agree w. Gods gift - if its true love, go for it!!!!

Stephanie Naylor ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-04

Wow, i thought that a really great poem , i loved the way that it flowed. And the rhyming was flawless and it never seemed forced, please, keep writing, its very good, 5/5

Romantic Lover ( F P C D ) at 2007-11-16

This was a very interesting and beautiful poem. I liked it so much that I had to respond to it. Meaning I wrote a poem to respond to each stanza you wrote. I hope you don't mind, but your poem here, inspired me.

What Else Can I Do ( F P C ) at 2007-11-21

Awww this is a really cute poem and the one that Romatic Lover wrote was beautiful also in the response of this one. Great poem 5/5

heartbroken and unable to heal at 2008-04-29

Looks like they've said it all! lol
i echo all of them, especisally gothic writer.

you hit the nail on the head with this one!
you'r a great writer and you should never stop!

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