by Live WeLL
Submission date : 2007-05-24
claire ( F P C D )
This is a great poem - amazing ideas, like always!!! good rhyming n stuff - ur always a great writer! i agree w. Gods gift - if its true love, go for it!!!!
Stephanie Naylor ( F P C D )
Wow, i thought that a really great poem , i loved the way that it flowed. And the rhyming was flawless and it never seemed forced, please, keep writing, its very good, 5/5
Romantic Lover ( F P C D )
This was a very interesting and beautiful poem. I liked it so much that I had to respond to it. Meaning I wrote a poem to respond to each stanza you wrote. I hope you don't mind, but your poem here, inspired me.
What Else Can I Do ( F P C )
Awww this is a really cute poem and the one that Romatic Lover wrote was beautiful also in the response of this one. Great poem 5/5
heartbroken and unable to heal
Looks like they've said it all! lol
i echo all of them, especisally gothic writer.
you hit the nail on the head with this one!
you'r a great writer and you should never stop!