Fairytale love

by Karl Wild GG23

I gave up my entire world for you,
While you promised to do the same,
It was fairytale love, we tried to pursue,
Now your saying someone else's name.

I guess I should have read the signs,
On my way through lonely town,
I should have read between the lines,
For I'd have surely turned around.

You said it would be you and me,
No matter what anyone tried to say,
At least for now, I'll have to disagree,
I'm not fond of these games you play.

If I gave you time to change my mind,
You'd say exactly what I needed to hear,
Find a way just to leave the past behind,
While making the future so perfectly clear.

You talk your way back into my heart,
Expecting acceptance for all your deceit,
I once felt the sorrow when we were apart,
Now being without you makes me complete.

 

Submission date : 2007-05-24

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playful*plaze* ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-06

Really god poem

SeXiSaMi ( F D ) at 2007-08-09

"You talk your way back into my heart,
Expecting acceptance for all your deceit,
I once felt the sorrow when we were apart,
Now being without you makes me complete."

i didnt really expect the ending to be like that.. but its like a reality check to people, you dont always get what you want, and we are better off with certain people in our lives its just the matter of accepting it.. i loved this poem, excellent job!
5/5

Emily at 2007-08-29

I really like this poem.
It kinda makes you feel a tad of sorrow,
with a pinch of hope.
Nicely done.

Leiann at 2007-10-15

This poem...was jus woahh i mean seriusly thats exactly how i feel since my break up and the last stanza with the complete without the other person part is what im aiming to feel...tha poem was jus gr8 and rele well written

kalia at 2007-10-23

I LOVE U LOL. NAW FOR REAL YOU GOT TALENT. HIT BE BACK BUT BEFORE U DO READ ONE OF MY POEMS. THE NAME IS KALIA.



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