by Live WeLL
Submission date : 2007-05-31
Fire lilies ( F P C D )
Great poem. It has a nice flow and great word choice. I really liked it. I gave it a 5/5.
Kaila ( F P C D )
Vocabulary was nice
Loved the imagery
Vanessa ( F P C D )
Nice flow, great show of strong emtion, excellent word choice, really well written 5/5
~*I Found It All In Him*~ ( F P C )
Wow...I liked this alot..It had so much feeling in it. Wonderful job. Very good poem.
claire ( F P C D )
Yeah, this did sound a lot like romeo and juliet. its so sad how things can come between true lovers. beautiful poem!