Uncontrollable Differences

by Live WeLL

It came so unexpected
Like a sudden thunder storm,
With winds so uncontrollable
Destroying every form.

But the impact was much worse,
As it was aimed straight at my heart.
The time had come for these three words,
It won ' t work out. " We must depart. "

But We never saw it coming
We were blinded by the bliss.
With hopes to last forever
And dreams where only we exist.

But fate was set. No room for change.
This was our only choice.
" I will always love you baby, "
I can still hear your precious voice.

We were one in many ways,
But ways that mattered weren ' t true.
Our families and our beliefs
Showing us we ' re way past due.

I ' m sorry I can ' t change these things,
These things that make me, ME
But I hope you know I love you still,
And that with all of this, I disagree.

I think it ' s best to say bye now
And put an end to a love so true.
Say goodbye, and say it quick
Before I fall deeper in love with you.


Submission date : 2007-05-31

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Fire lilies ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-31

Great poem. It has a nice flow and great word choice. I really liked it. I gave it a 5/5.

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-01

Very good!
Great emotion
Vocabulary was nice
Loved the imagery
wonderful poem

Vanessa ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-01

Nice flow, great show of strong emtion, excellent word choice, really well written 5/5

~*I Found It All In Him*~ ( F P C ) at 2007-06-07

Wow...I liked this alot..It had so much feeling in it. Wonderful job. Very good poem.

claire ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-09

Yeah, this did sound a lot like romeo and juliet. its so sad how things can come between true lovers. beautiful poem!

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