Paint a Smile

by Chris

Paint a perfect smile
Straight onto my face
Wash it off good
Don't leave any trace
Of our happy times
The days we shared
Hours of togetherness
Back when we cared
But we lost touch
My hand slipped from yours
We went our ways
And closed open doors
Then times got tough
I needed you
My heart was empty
My sadness grew
I silently wept
As you left me there
Lost and alone
I just can't bare
Another lost heart
Or even more crying
I can't handle much
Of anyone's lying
I need someone here
To do what you never would
Paint a permanent smile
The way you never could

 

Submission date : 2007-06-05

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Elizabeth at 2007-06-12

Chris this is a great poem sounds like you really got hurt. love doesnt always suck though.

Angela at 2007-06-12

Its a really good poem you have lots of talent!!!!

Hidden Kiss ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-13

Yeah that is gorgeous i love how it rythmed and how it was so powerful in the way that you wrote it. The feeling reminded me of how i feel, how i have felt, sad - but gorgeous

=]

here4you4ever at 2007-06-13

Omg! this is amazing. i love it, the emotions i felt were so awsume. the wording and everything.

KIMMY at 2007-07-04

THIS IS A GREAT POEM!!!! I COULD FEEL THE PAIN AND THE EMOTION!!!



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