If Life Was A Dream (Collab)

by Cindy

If life was a dream
You'd be here with me
Laughing, hand in hand
Smiling for all to see


If life was a dream
Together we'd grow old
Still making future plans
Forgetting years stole.

If life was a dream
Sun would never fade alone
Darkness simply surrenders
To love you have shown

If life was a dream
No tear would fall from eyes
No prayer will go unheard
True love could never die

If life was a dream
I'd be back in your arms
Kissing your sweet lips
Safe from all life's harms

If life was a dream
I'd never feel alone
Pain would not exist
For you would be home

If life was a dream
No plans would be betrayed
Love will shower everywhere
No need to be afraid

If life was a dream
Why would I need to sleep?
When I have you by my side
And your heart to keep


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End Of Eternity

Written By : Cynthia Graver and End Of Eternity
June 8 , 2007

 

Submission date : 2007-06-07
Last edit : 2007-06-12

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Votes : 31
Rating : 5.0

Latest comments

uwouldntno at 2007-06-14

Wow this is a really good poem... I hope you continue writeing you are very good

sincerely yours

uwouldntno

Tracy D Rollings ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-15

Excellent poem as always from the master, great job loved it , my favor line was: If life was a dream
No plans would be betrayed
Love will shower everywhere
No need to be afraid
I really needed them words all my life thanks Cindy , you made me feel better, your friend Tracy dean 5/5

RETARTED GHOST ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-23

Cindy,
you two have done an excellent job in this piece.Such a wonderful poem you have written.The title is very well written and so is the poem.I can relate to it so much!!!How beautifully you have done this.I can quite imagine how you have done like.The ryhming was excellent.Each stanza was very well written.I over come felt like reading it again and again.The moment I finished reading this how it got stuck through my head.You two have done an excellent job!!!
WELL DONE!!!
all the best
and take care

c 0 n f u s e d ( F C D ) at 2008-03-10

I totally love this because every single word in this poem is exactly whats on my mind. i love it .

DoRk ( P ) at 2010-05-07

Oh so true but sumtimes u jus do wish life really ws a dream



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