I'm Still In Love With You

by Live WeLL

It' s been 2 years since we broke up
But you' re still on my mind.
I thought by now I' d be over you,
But I just can' t put the past behind.

You really were my other half
And we went for four years strong.
But things go wrong and people change
I guess you and I just don' t belong.

I still can' t help but think of us,
And the way you made me feel.
You made me smile like no one else
And showed me a love so unreal.

You, my dear, were my first true love.
I gave you nothing but my heart.
I devoted everything to see your smile
If I could, I' d go back to the start.

I' ll never forget your bright smile
And the way it made everything right.
You were the most important part of my life
It was you on my mind, from day to night.

But since that day, you left so far
To make things easier for you and I.
I wish you' d visit just one more day
So I could at least say a proper goodbye.

It' s such a shame that you' ve moved on
And put the possibility of us to an end.
We were nothing but great together.
You with her, I just can' t comprehend.

They say you won' t forget your first love
And I never believed it was true.
But after all these years, I know its real
Because I' m still in love with you.

 

Submission date : 2007-06-10
Last edit : 2008-02-23

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Jenni ( F C D ) at 2008-03-04

This was such a sentimental poem. You really captured the emotions in it, and I felt as though it was happening to me. Very good job! Excellent writing. 5/5

noha ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-18

Realy i love this one , nice flow, so sweet and my favorite part when you say:You really were my other half
And we went for four years strong.
But things go wrong and people change
I guess you and I just don' t belong.
you felling come through , i feel it like if me in your place , keep write in this way,noha

Morgan ( C ) at 2008-03-23

Great work. You never do forget but you sometimes find something better.

Lina ( F P C ) at 2008-04-13

I know its hard letting go of people you love trust me i know ..... but in the end u let them go or keep them either way just try not to hurt yourself in the mean time.

Loni ( F C D ) at 2008-06-05

This is pretty good! Awesome poem! 5/5



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