by Live WeLL
Submission date : 2007-06-10
Last edit : 2008-02-23
Jenni ( F C D )
This was such a sentimental poem. You really captured the emotions in it, and I felt as though it was happening to me. Very good job! Excellent writing. 5/5
noha ( F P C D )
Realy i love this one , nice flow, so sweet and my favorite part when you say:You really were my other half
And we went for four years strong.
But things go wrong and people change
I guess you and I just don' t belong.
you felling come through , i feel it like if me in your place , keep write in this way,noha
Morgan ( C )
Great work. You never do forget but you sometimes find something better.
Lina ( F P C )
I know its hard letting go of people you love trust me i know ..... but in the end u let them go or keep them either way just try not to hurt yourself in the mean time.
Loni ( F C D )
This is pretty good! Awesome poem! 5/5