If I could.

by BlueDreams

If I could catch a million stars,
I know just what I'd do,
I'd arrange them on a paper,
And sing them back to you.

If I could give you gifts of gold,
I'd have each one inscribed,
With a special memory,
That I hold, dear, inside.

I'd give you everything you'd want,
Or you could ever need,
But that would never measure,
All you've given me.

With honesty and compassion,
You lend a tender ear.
And when I look into your eyes,
My troubles disappear.

But, I am not a rich man,
Nor lucky enough to catch a star,
I can only give you one thing...
All that's in my heart.

This is something you'll never be without,
Whether you are near or far,
For it is a simple but precious gift...
My love is where you are.


MAY 15 2007
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Last edit : 2007-06-18

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Rachel ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-05

Beautifully penned. It flowed well and conveyed such a sweet message to your love...Nicely done!

Gabrielle ( C D ) at 2008-02-07

Whoever you wrote this for is very lucky to have such love.... 5/5

Fall For You Again ( F P C ) at 2008-09-01

Wow, so i'm new to your poetry, but i'm loving it. you have such an expressive voice and convey it in such a soft, melodic way. it's truly beautiful. thanks so much for sharing!

Kayla ( F P C ) at 2008-09-07

This was so pretty. It gave me chills. Beautiful. I don't know much about poetry so I can't give you an expert comment about how "these words worked great with these thoughts..." or what not but I can say that you are amazing. Great job.
~Kayla

blazingSapphire at 2012-05-14

Wow...
wow...
she is lucky whoever this is for.. beautiful romantic poem ..like..wow..
"This is something you'll never be without,
Whether you are near or far,
For it is a simple but precious gift...
My love is where you are."
^_^



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