Step into the emptiness

by NyellMoonlight

Let me drink life
from the palms of your hands
Borrow me your wings
made of dreams
just for a while,
to feel alive...

Don't hold back
in front of the abyss
let's step into the emptiness
and learn how to fall.

I want that the space between us
be colored as the butterfly's wings
and to drown in those colors
every time I get closer.

Just let me slide
on the rainbows in your eyes,
hold the torch high
on the hollow boulevards of my nightmares,
be my ally in this iced world.

Don't hold back
in front of the abyss
let's step into the emptiness
and learn how to fly.

 

Submission date : 2007-07-04
Last edit : 2007-07-04

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Rating : 5.0

Latest comments

SlaveToTheMusic ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-25

I honestly don't know how you write poems that have a flow but don't rhyme I have only seen very few who can do this really well and it amazes me. Again the emotion so deep. I truely have loved every piece of yours I have read here. Well done you deserve a 5/5~mel

DaRk AnG3l RoS3 ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-31

Another 5/5, i loved the opening paragraph. wikid :)

x

Marc Ortiz ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-31

I love the opening stanza in the poem.. It really grabs the reader's attention. It flowed nicely too, well done.

Cella Bella ( F C D ) at 2007-08-26

You have an amazing way with words. This is just absolutely wonderful. I was captivated from begining to end. Excellent piece!! 5/5

marcella

Chibi Link at 2007-09-04

This is the most beautiful thing i have ever read.
every word just falls into place, masterful.
5/5



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