How much I love you

by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop

Sometimes when I sit,
And stare at the stars above,
My thoughts turn to you,
The one that I love.

Why do I love you,
The way that I do,
Maybe you will understand,
By the time I am through.

When I hear your voice,
I am filled with much cheer,
And multiply that by ten,
Every time that you're near.

I can not even describe,
What happens when we touch,
I guess that is because,
I love you so much.

I get lost in your eyes,
Even to this day,
The feeling is right,
But do you feel the same?

you are beautiful and funny,
Outgoing and smart,
Only you can unlock,
The key to this heart.

If it proves not to be,
I will just sit and wait,
Because with the love I have,
It is never too late.

 

Submission date : 2007-12-23
Last edit : 2007-12-23

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Rating : 4.9

Latest comments

NyellMoonlight ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-08

Sweet love poem, written in a good way. It has great, flawless flow from the beginning to the end. The rhymes are too typical for my personal taste, but that didn't ruin impression on this piece. Very emotional,, touching poem.

Elysia ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-09

Oh my gosh that is so sweet! wow dude you are preety good... i hope she finds out some day but hey dont worry bout it she'll know

me just you ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-13

Aww adorable poem i love how you described what you love about her it made me smile : ) you obviously really care about this girl ! anyway 5/5 <33

Estefania ( F C ) at 2008-01-15

OMG i really loved it its a really great poem and i can relate to every word great job!!!!!!!!

Lisa ( F C D ) at 2008-03-20

Amazing work
keep it up!



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