I Love You More

by JustKristina

I'll be here for you when you feel down,
I'll take your frown, and turn it around

I'll be here for you when get mad
I'll make something good out of all the bad

I'll be here for you when things get tough
I'll hold you tight when you've had enough

I'll be here for you when your farthest away
I'll call you up and in my heart you'll stay

I'll be here for you when something's gone wrong
I'll help you through it and we'll move along

I'll be here for you through the good and the bad
I'll ease your pains, when you are sad

I'll be here for you when no one else will
I'll take up your thoughts and your heart I'll fill

I'll be here for you through heaven and hell
I'll listen to everything that you have to tell

I'll be here for you for whatever you need
I'll take your hand, and follow as I lead

I'll be here for you when nothing goes your way
I'll comfort you and think of sweet things to say

I'll be here for you despite the miles
I'll love you always, in spite of our trials

I'll be here for you when your at your lowest low
I'll hold your hand and watch our love grow

I'll be here for you when you start to fall apart
I'll hug you and help you to follow your heart

I'll be here for you when you say what I've waited for
I'll kiss your lips and say, "I love you more"

 

Submission date : 2008-01-11
Last edit : 2008-01-16

Visits : 2640
Votes : 9
Rating : 5.0

Latest comments

IfYouWantMe ( F C ) at 2008-02-11

Awesomest!!!!

Tabitha Jean Vance ( F ) at 2008-02-26

I love this poem i feel the same way about my boyfriend it is great when you have someone that can make you feel this way great work 5/5

reina ( P C ) at 2008-03-01

Heres something i can show all my friends this is a really good poem and it matches alot of what me and my friend charlie kinda have cause we were more then just something then i turned out to be one of his best friends!id like to read more of what you got!

Christopher ( F C ) at 2008-03-27

I enjoyed this poem. There was a load of repitition, but it was used effectively to portray how you are feeling. I just started reading and writting poetry and have problems expressing myself in the written word. It's always great to see talent and a unique write. Some people just don't like difference, but I adore it. Good job 5

XxAshleyxX ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-03

I feel the exact same way about my boyfriend!
like ive said before..you are an amazing and talented writer!
5/5 most def.
<3
XxAshleyxX



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