Comments - One phone call away

Erin ( F P C ) at 2008-09-05

Beautiful poem leaves me speechless
5/5 you deserve it

Nikoshiana ( F P C ) at 2008-09-07

Lovely write

Crazy ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-08

It has happend to me too.I have been in love with a guy that conted on me as his best friend.
Great poem

MarkKicher at 2008-09-09


Nz0 ( F C D ) at 2008-09-09

You hav captured the escence of love perfectly in this small but punchy poem. 5/5

cassanova ( F P C ) at 2008-09-10

Such a beatiful poem, so expressive with few words. 5/5

MarkKicher at 2008-09-10

This is the 2nd time im gonna say this! this is GREAT!

jeff at 2008-09-11

I only wish that I could also write such anice poem. But N.way its good very good indeed I LOVE IT .......'

Crystal Rose ( F P C ) at 2008-09-26

What a sweet loving poem. I hope David appreciates the woman you are and the love you have for him.

Bhavingr8 ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-01

Only a stupid wouldn't add you in his/her favorite author's list, after reading this poem. This poem touched my heart very very deeply. Somewhere down the line I could find myself reciting the same words to my ex who's my best friend. I wish I can just dedicate this poem to her. But now that the equations have changed, I'm happy and content by reading this poem of yours. Rock On and keep writing.


kerry at 2008-10-02

Oh this was amazing x

stephanie ( F P C ) at 2008-10-28

Oh my gosh...i love this...its so romantic and i just really love it!

Shokry ( F C ) at 2008-10-29

It's full of true feelings..

good luck.. 5/5

unspokken ( C ) at 2008-11-07

Ahhhh. You write such good poems; I love them. You can really tell how you feel, like you really get the emotions out and the point across

Reaching out for help ( F P C ) at 2008-11-14

This sounds like one of those tough relationships where one has to let go even while still loving another, that's so tough, but you did a great job portraying the emotion :) and it seems you are a great friend