Comments - Ours to Keep

Maya ( F P C D ) at 2009-07-18


You did so well on this! Such a heartfelt poem and it jus danced off the page. It is clear to see how happy you are:)

Holding you close as I sing our song,
thinking you lusted, but I was wrong
You chose me, and we're taking the leap
I hope ours is a love to keep


This stanza I loved best, because it shows you are very sincere in your feelings and that these are not just words here on this page.

A very good poem, a joy to read.

Keep rocking, girl:)

5/5 Ingrid

G ( F P C ) at 2009-07-18

This is a lovley poem It can go on and on and the stanzas is new and makes a flow for love and holds that nobody can break i really love this poem.

ashley does not exist ( F P C D ) at 2009-07-18

It seems like u really happy, but ur also afraid of the past. This is a really good write. One thingi hate abobut poetry is love poems but this poem right here is a good poem keep up the good job

dreamofolwin ( F P C D ) at 2009-07-20

A brilliant write!... I enjoyed reading every bit of this poem. It is so heartfelt and real... like te love you have expressed in it.
Extremely well done... I loved it :]

Fsams ( F P C D ) at 2009-07-21

Wow what a lovely poem....after a long time
I felt to write a love have inspired me again..Great rhymes dear


mandy ( F C D ) at 2009-07-22

Beautifuly written; filled with love, joy and excitment. I felt it all, 5/5!

- mandy :)

Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D ) at 2009-07-24

A difficult subject to broach but as in all of your poems I have read treated with heart and understanding know your fear and understand your need to get it into the open so you can see what you have decided is right.
Written as usual with a poets flair by one who knows her art. Ray S 5/5

Emma Wallis ( F P C D ) at 2009-09-16

Beautifully written. The poem flowed wonderfully, 5/5. Em x