Comments - If Only

T e m p s ( F P C D ) at 2009-08-02

A beautiful write, this could almost be put under love I think, but its up to you. Loved to see you trying a different format, the longer lines paid off. Well done!

Maya ( F P C D ) at 2009-08-02

Beautiful, dear Silvia:)

This is a love poem!

I love this verse, I have these feeling too for someone....

I hope we both will have what we long for;)


5/5 Ingrid

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2009-08-02

Great job on the club challenge :) I get this sad feeling when I read this piece. Longing for someone that isn't with you....I know those feelings so well.
Love Cindy

Directly Implied ( F P C D ) at 2009-08-03

I agree with everyone. Sad but romantic. I don't normally like repetition but you made it work in this case. Good job

dreamofolwin ( F P C D ) at 2009-08-03

Wonderful :) I loved reading this Sylvia. Yes ... sad but romantic... just beautiful!

Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D ) at 2009-08-03

I think this poem is really great and as I have said many time before my admiration for the new and old members of our sight grows daily,
simply because I never get bored reading their poems though at time I can wander why.
I am glad to say this poem is going into my excellent and with my favourites it is beautifully craft and balanced and it stirred me. 5/5 Ray S

Meena Krish ( F P C D ) at 2009-08-03

A yearning heart that wishes for love's
presence...nicely written.

imyours4now ( F C D ) at 2009-08-08

I absolutely love this poem. It's filled with emotion. I wrote a poem that sot of has the same meaning, could you please check it out? It's called 'My secret love'

5/5 well done!