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Cinnamonspice ( F P C D ) at 2011-07-15

Most definitely a different type of love poem :-) I had to smile as I read it. Your imagination is showing again

GreenEyedBeauty ( F P C D ) at 2011-07-24

I love love love yer unique words! yer pretty awesome man :D

Mariah at 2011-07-27

I fell in love w/ it :D
It's absolutely awesome! C:

AdRiAnAxO ( P C ) at 2011-07-27

HAHA i like this poem your taking all things diguisting and turning them into something you can it's very creative :)

well done:)

GreenEyedBeauty ( F P C D ) at 2011-07-27

Can i just tell you tha real reason i love this poem;

i met this hippy boy one time; and i smoked maddddd reffer with him; and we had a great ol' time chatting all crazy about everything under tha sun; and moon bc i love tha moon <3 but um when ever he would text me; hed just say "you!" and id be like yes? who else? not you!

and this poem just makes me think about that great ol' time with my lost hippy friend :D

this is freakin awesome! <333

Like you :)

illfated at 2011-07-29

Great poem. I liked all the inventions you made for your love and the way you gave a reason for it. This one's a favorite.

kristian Bisig ( F P C D ) at 2011-07-29

I loved it. great poem 5/5 it was very romantic

schizophrenic ( F P C ) at 2011-08-04

Great one thanx for sharin i really loved it , btw what kind ov colors does that hit , i really miss those day's since i no longer remembar wot used to take us me der

Joseph Boadi ( F C ) at 2011-08-04

Wow i enjoyd everi bit of it.ur imageries were wel place.u gud at wat u do

rose blooming ( F P C D ) at 2011-08-27

The first line is kind of ewe and in the fourth line why would you compare some one to feet?
Any ways it is a good poem and the flow of it was good all the way through.


TJ BECKER Arizona Eagle ( F P C D ) at 2011-09-16

LOL ok bro you cracked me up but you know this is the most honest of love poems, not mushy cause most guys don't go there. But the lady has to get the message and beam with delight lol

Way to go :-)

Danielle Love ( F P C D ) at 2011-10-20

I like it :P

Disturbedfan420 at 2012-01-05

I enjoyed it, it was very creative[:

Fly High ( F C D ) at 2012-05-08

Awwwh this poem is so sweet <3

flaredhyz at 2012-06-05

Hahha it's funny but romantic at the same time. So let's sing ''i love u, u love mee'' hahhaha great job

omar ( F C D ) at 2012-06-30

Nice poem dude. Keep it up

Infinite Catastrophe aka Alisha ( F P C D ) at 2012-08-14

This is the funniest, sweetest.. BEST love poem I have ever read!

I love your unique spin. A very enjoyable read.

Write more! 5/5

help me find myself ( F C D ) at 2012-12-25

I loved this poem (:

aubreynicole ( F P C D ) at 2013-01-05 gosh...I'm in love with this poem.... great work:D

StormyStar ( F P C D ) at 2014-03-14

When I'm sad I read this poem and it makes me laugh everytime:) just thought I'd let you know :D I love your writing :)