Comments - Waiting Game

Everlasting ( F C D ) at 2012-02-18

True, it doesn't matter how long it takes as long as there is love from both sides. I like the tone and the message in your poem.

UndeadGrace ( C ) at 2012-02-19

Dang good stuff bro
It like I was reading my thoughts

Amreen ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-19

Good poem...good start...good flow....messaged conveyed to the right....!!

He see's it in her eyes,
that she have been hurt before in the past,
Her heart has felt the touch of love,
but never did it last

good verse

Moments go by and she starts to think,
maybe this is the one,
But whenever her heart starts to feel love,
All she does is Run

my favorite verse

Waiting for someone special just shows,
how special it can really be,

my favorite and true enough...:)

Miss Prolific Poetess ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-19

My gosh this is an amazing piece, simple but it is very well written and very descriptive... 5/5

Randy East ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-20

Second line "have" should be "has"

I really like your poem here, you show a lot of talent in your writing. some lines are a bit to long for m taste and through the rhythm off just a bit, you might consider cutting some syllables out of them. example are... line 2... and the first line in the last stanza.

other then than its ace! 5/5

mello193 ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-24

This was really sweet. very true i suppose. nice job

sonia12 ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-27

I like this poem very much:) so true... good job!

believeinlove87 ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-27

I love this poem :))!
Going into my favorites.

This is how alot of girls are, im this way now bcuz of getting hurt. So many people can relate to this poem.

Every single word shows a girl that its okay to be hurt and to be scared. That no matter how long it takes you will find someone amazing, someone who wont hurt you.

love it :)

Angel ( F P C D ) at 2012-03-03

Wow this explains life for many girl i love it :)

Rihanna Babez ( F P C D ) at 2012-03-11

Wow speechless !!!!

This was such an amazging poem that many girls life is like this(: I can relate to it love just beatiful(:

5/5 from Mee x

Liliana ( F C D ) at 2012-03-18

How beautiful :) great poem

Janna Antal at 2012-04-21

Loved it!

crishmerl ( F P C D ) at 2012-05-23

--I like the poem and it is so relatable for some people who been hurt before...and frustrated in the means of love. Yet, it not easy to open your heart again and to welcome love into you heart because of the past that you anticipate some way you will be hurt when you love again...

"He's everything she's wanted,
but she just cant seem to let him in,
Because her hearts been hurt before,
and she promised herself never again"

--Well, this part tells that the girl withdraws herself and constrain her heart not to in love again. I like the ideas here.

Just take some time and listen,
See where you need to start,
Time and Patience is what it takes,
to mend a broken heart,

--Yeah, I agree in this part when you trying to let that person loves you... you must have patience and time to wait it until the wound of her heart heal..."it takes time to mend a broken heart" love this line...

No matter how many months or years it takes,
1,2 or even 3,
Waiting for someone special just shows,
how special it can really be,

--Well, the ending part is good, too. I really enjoy reading this. Keep writing more:))

Thomas ( F P C D ) at 2012-05-24

Nice poem, good rhythm.

Only downside was the grammatical error at the start (have should be has)
This messed the rhythm up a little but still a good poem.
Keep it up!