Comments - Sugar

Marvellous ( F P C D ) at 2016-06-05

The right answer, solves a problem. If it's not working, it's faulty.

Ben Pickard ( F C D ) at 2016-06-06

Love really can be a lot to handle sometimes, can't it? Especially when it's as passionate and full on as this one sounds.

Well done and all the best,


Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-06-08

Another enthralling write. We always seem to go for those that make life that bit harder even though they may taste sweet they're not. I like the metaphors in this piece and the subtle rhymes.