Comments - The Road Home

Mr Darcy ( F P C D ) at 2016-08-03

Hello Elizabeth,

this is a powerful piece of writing. A personal story of a journey, a hard undulating journey where paths cross and then veer off. In this journey the attempt is to keep these paths on the same track, but that is difficult when they are going to different destinations. As your poem concludes, sometimes those paths need to be trod by different people.

Well done, a good cathartic piece of writing. I hope it inspires others who are struggling too.

Take care,