Comments - Nothing Less Than Divine

Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Lustreless skies turn blue


What a great line. I love the word 'lustreless'; highly underused, in my opinion.

Lovely write and a warm welcome to the site, by the way.

Take care,


Nicolette at 2016-09-18

Ah thank you. :) One of my favourites on this site happens to be yours, Anna Elizabeth May.

Ben Pickard ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Thank you, Nicolette.

Golden anGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Oh Nicole, this is lovely... These lines standout

Say it one more time, show me all your love
Kiss me tender
Never surrender
You are the brightest star, there's none above

butterfly in my stomach flew while reading this.
well done


Nicolette at 2016-09-18

Thanks a lot! I feel as though the last line could have been a lot better but I wasn't sure how as I couldn't find another sentence to finish with 10 syllables.

Em ( F P C D ) at 2016-09-18

Nicolette, this is such a beautifully rhymed piece.


Nicolette at 2016-09-18

Thank you again. :)