Comments - For you..

bslocum21 ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-12

so loving.. i enjoyed this. i vote a 5. check mine out..
this is good. is it to a boyfrend?
interesting and haert warming.

Amanda Linzi ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-12

Yes absolutely loved it! Wonderful job and thanks for the comment! :)

Carmen ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-12

wow... i wish nobody that i love will ever say they're not good enough for me.... because i wouldnt love them if they were? hmm.... well, great poem! 5/5

Sherrie ( F C D ) at 2005-04-12

I liked this... but I had a hard time wanting to finish it... Good work tho... Sherrie

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-13

a lot of feeling and emotion mixed with understanding makes a beautiful poem may God bless you

katie! ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-13

That was really good, well done... I really enjoyed it... I can relate to it.. it was well written keep it up

ShadowedPhoenix ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-13

Great poem but maybe try to shorten it becoz it's starts to lose it's appeal but i still really enjoyed it and gave it 5

David ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-13

Its a really good poem that has a really good rhyme to it. Also some of the lines are uneven. Not trying to point out all thats wrong its just that people do that to mine sometimes. Its a really good poem though. My ex did that to me and this is the poem I could have used then to bring up my uhhhhhh hopes. thank you for sharing the poem with us.

Brooke ( F C D ) at 2005-04-13

Very well written and good rhyme I seem to have trouble with that! Showed emotion and feeling! Great poem 5/5! Take Care! Brooke

ღl*themeuneverseen*l ღ ( F C D ) at 2005-04-13

Very cute and sweet! It flowed so well....very beautiful! Please rate and comment on some of mine!
love alwayz.....

»«¤ß詤»« ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-14

wow that is so sweet, truely touching. awsome work!!!!! >>5/5<<

Kayla Dearing ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-14

great poem i know how that feels!

chad ( F D ) at 2005-04-14

wonderful job. youre a great writer. the rhythm and meter were off (not to be critical, it just makes it hard to flow thru and read it), but the message was strong enough to carry it thru to the end.

i give it a 5/5... great poem, keep them coming.

No Motiv? ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-14

good poem...very expressive. I gave it a 4/5.

Sherrie ( F C D ) at 2005-04-14

Oh hun... this is really good... I can feel you have had a broken heart...I think you did a great job with this poem...
Xox Sherrie

Tiffany ( F C D ) at 2005-04-15

Great poem. Beautiful and well written. Keep it up!


truth hurts ( F C D ) at 2005-04-15

aww tht's soo sweet...good job n keep writing gurl!

Ria~the dreamcaster ( F C D ) at 2005-04-16

This is great,it's like I hear myself reminded me so much...ohh:(
I guess we have gone through the same phase..It's a lovely poem very emotional
I would like to talk with you, if you have msn add me please (if you want)

Ashley ( C ) at 2005-04-18

Wow, so much emotion was in that poem. Great job. Keep writing. Your truely have talent.

happy days ( P C D ) at 2005-04-19

i really liked that, i loved all the emotion in it aswell. keep up the good work xxxx

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