Comments - Someone else

krystal ( P C ) at 2005-05-13

thats awesome!!! 5/5 it reminds me of my ex actally it sounds just like it like your living my life lol keep up the great work

Christa Bixby at 2005-05-14

wow, I really enjoyed your poem! It helps to know other people feel the same way I do. Keep you your amazing work.

Samantha H. at 2005-05-14

Wow, its such a sad poem. I hope you get over him and find someone better.-love- --Sam--

xUnbreakablex ( F P C ) at 2005-05-14

that was gr8! the rhyming was really gud 5/5 keep it up x x x

Olivia at 2005-05-14

awesome, One of the best....

*|ღ|*Christina*|ღ|* ( F P C D ) at 2005-05-14

I know how that feels...well the guy I broke up with moved on sooooo fast. i knew he was over me...but I couldn't get over him...then i talked to him and he told me if he had the chance he'd take me back without a second thought. That's why you should tell him how you feel...cuz maybe he hasn't gotten over you yet

Emma at 2005-05-14

wow! That was amazing! very sad but really great! I loved it!

Love Emma


stephanie at 2005-05-14

i love this poem . its awsome n i can relate to it.

Nat the dreamer ( F P ) at 2005-05-15

This poem is excellent. I've totally been there, well AM there. It flows really well, and I love the rhyme.

DeDe at 2005-05-15

God do I know how you feel, it's hard isn't it? I wish you the best of luck, and you have ,my support!

Dani Fitch ( F P C ) at 2005-05-15

thanx so much guys! yeh it really hurts coz my boyfriend and i only just broke up like a few weeks ago. it just breaks my heart to think that i was so foolish to believe it'd be forever. im only 16, how dum could i get! oh well, sometimes u just gotta learn. god bless u all, thanx for ur support :)
luv dani

Tommy at 2005-05-15

i love that poem, exactly the way i feel right was really good!!

Dani Fitch ( F P C ) at 2005-05-15

hehe i luv u guys :)

hassan ( P ) at 2005-05-15

realllllllly nice poem 5/5! keep it up

hassan ( P ) at 2005-05-15

really good poem, 5/5

Amber at 2005-05-15

I really like this poem and I can seriously relate to it! This is exactly how I felt when I saw my ex with another girl!

Desirae at 2005-05-16

That is a nice poem

Dani Fitch ( F P C ) at 2005-05-16

thankyou so much everyone!! its awesome to hear ur comments and really encouraging. i think this is definately something that both sexes commonly come across during their life, especially when ur a teenager, ouch huh :( ur support is so good, thanx for cheering me up and helping me stay strong. lots of love,
dani xoxo
God bless

~*~*eMmM*~*~ at 2005-05-16

realli good. i can realate. keep up tha good writin. xox

skye at 2005-05-16

you did a very good job it hit home

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