Comments - If I ever

andrea ( F C D ) at 2005-07-11

this was a good poem. good rhyming

Stephen ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-11

Nice Poem I Liked It Keep Up The Good Work!!

michael struve at 2005-07-11

This is an awsome poem.

Wintersolstice ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-13

Understad how much you care for this person, You would give your life for him right? He's part of you, actualy he is you. Well expressed through this poem. Deep and well thought out. X

Natalie84 ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-13

You don't need anyone's suggestions to make this better. It's perfect. So heart felt and sweet! Excellent write.

There is one minor thing I'd suggest...just that you don't really need the commas after each line.

What a wonderful poem! :) 5/5

Brooke ( F C D ) at 2005-07-13

Beautifully written! The flow and rhyme was perfect. I don't have any suggestions on this poem! Nice work! Take Care! Brooke! =)

Britney ( F C D ) at 2005-07-13

This poem is excelllent! I dont think there is anything to change it's great how it is. 5/5! And simply lovely.

Derekcj at 2005-07-14

Awww, such an amazing poem! It's so perfect! Definitely one of the best poems I've ever read! I really mean that! =)

Crystal ( F P C ) at 2005-07-14

hey that was a very good poem. and it is so true when you find someone that you really care about. great job. keep writing.

Jade at 2005-07-18

omg for some reason i love this poem its short and sweet good job!!

lilia ( F P C ) at 2005-07-18

omg thats soo cute!! i loved it. keep it up. also check out my poems if u get a chance. thankss

lilmamma ( F ) at 2005-07-18

Thats good and i know how u feel gurl i have a man and i dont know what i would do if he left me.

Rose Galiza at 2005-07-18

i lKe tHz...iTz cOOL...iT mAKez sEnse..

Jessie Mae at 2005-07-18

I really like this poem. Thats exactly how i feel with my b/f Josh. Keep em coming!!!!!

Ëхþ£ĩÇïŦ•§ħø®Ŧï at 2005-07-19

AWWWWWWWWWW, that is soooooooooooooooo sweet ;)

Clouds n ur Is at 2005-07-19

Excellent poem. Loved it.

Clouds n ur Is.

BJ ( F P C ) at 2005-07-19

this is really cute! i love it!

Sarah at 2005-07-19

This is so sweet!!! It was short but got to the point very,very nicely. I love it! AWESOMEJOB!!! 8/5

makenzie at 2005-07-19

good poem..i liked it a lot!!

Anastasia ( P ) at 2005-07-19

I love this poem almost made me cry

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