Comments - Love Is When...

Lyudmila ( F P D ) at 2005-07-23

i really liked it. it's so much true!
keep it up.

Darien ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-23

I know how it feels like when someone is holding on to another person. That's exactly how I feel right now!.. This is an awesome poem on love. :)

Dark Savior ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-23

I give it a five for the writing, i like to de-attach myself from the topic though. I don't really believe that love exists anymore. I think it is a good peice of literature. Very well done.

P.S. A reply to one of my poems would be appreciated if at all possible. oh, i didn't think people actually read "the read me" forums

Brooke ( F C D ) at 2005-07-23

So true. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem. Love is so confusing, I am still trying to figure it out! Good write! Take Care! Brooke~

Natalie84 ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-23

I like the was well written and flowed very well BUT this "take a beating" stuff is a little whacky. I hope you didn't mean literally....and were talking more along the lines of hard times and not an actual BEATING. That's NOT love I would suggest you change your to you're where necessary and capitalize where necessary......NICE WRITE!! :)

Nouna ( F C D ) at 2005-07-23

nice poe.. it was well-written and had a nice flow... very heartfelt
keep goin

William Flores ( F C ) at 2005-07-23

Very nice poem. but i have to agree with Natalie84. hope the "beating" part isn't true. no one deserves to be beaten. but other than that its a great poem. keep on writing.

You can come and check out some of my poems if and when you please to do so...

ღl*themeuneverseen*l ღ ( F C D ) at 2005-07-24

WOW!WOW!WOW! This is definatley one of my favorites! I loved this sooo much and this is exactly how I feel about my boyfreind! Amazing work!
<3Much Love<3

Arora ( P C D ) at 2005-07-25

awww, that's so cute, very well written! 5/5

Kristen ( F P C ) at 2005-07-25

i love this poem, its so true and very nicely put..great job

Dry Eyes at 2005-07-25

Great poem, Ive found Love once but I let it go, it was the biggest mistake of my life.
Look forward to read more of your poems.
Please check mine out it would mean a lot!!

XxTeArSxX17 ( F P C D ) at 2005-07-26

wow this poem is amazing you did such a good job keep it up 5/5

Elvira ( F P C ) at 2005-07-26

great poem....i can totally relate

Kassie ( F C ) at 2005-07-26


~*Ace*~ at 2005-07-26

not bad, keep up the good work!!

Felicia at 2005-07-26

Thats really good....
it really reminds me of my xboy friend...Imiss him so much....i hope well turn out like the poem...
but not with my luck

Kim aguirre at 2005-07-26

This poem hits it right on the dot. Im still waiting for him to come back. I can really relate to this poem and i just want to say that it is beautiful!
thanks for writing keep it up its great!

Victim of Thought © at 2005-07-26

Aww..Such a beautiful work of art. I'll make sure I read some more of your poems. Keep writing and take care :)

Baby poet ( F P C ) at 2005-07-26

Thats the most brilliant poem I have read in a long time! Buzzing with emotion and you can read that what your saying is coming from the depths f your heart....You're an amazing poet I love you're work - I wouldn't mind some tips- Please comment and vote on some of mine xx
~*~ DarkTink ~*~

Amanda at 2005-07-26

hey i voted this as a 5 because i loved it i can relate to it and you have spoke the truth i think its a great poem so keeep up the good work!!!!

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