Comments - Tear Stained face

sarah ( F P C ) at 2005-11-12

Amazing writen poem about love and death such pain in this romance but the love will always show in her tear stained face i do love this piece

ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ ( F P C D ) at 2005-11-13

I understand what u mean and i love the way that u write..i love how u put your emotions first and everything else 2nd...keep up the great job...i can relate to u alot 5/5

~*Who Cares?*~ ( F P C D ) at 2005-11-13

Im sry if this is tru....gr8 poem...5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

♥Missy♥ ( F P C D ) at 2005-11-13

The Rhyming in this poem is excellent, and I love the simile "Like a Thin Piece of Lace." Great Job, 5/5

Morgan at 2005-11-14

Zi loved it. Def a 5/5!! The title grabbed my attention so I had to read it! It just got better the more I read.
Great flow. It's flawless, perfect!

aaron-16/m/cali ( F P C D ) at 2005-11-14

That was a magnificent poem. so strong and bold. i felt it throught to the bones. the rhythm was perfect. it was eerie in a sense. i liked it.

Amanda Linzi (Millie) ( F P C D ) at 2005-11-16

Oh it was great to read right to the end and i found it an interesting piece of work with such talent behind it! A bit sad though....

kim at 2005-11-18

That was amazing i realy enjoyed reading it and i think im going to have a look at the rest of your poems as that one was so good and touching 5/5

♥aLYSSA♥ at 2005-11-18

Wow... i really love this. i think that you are every talented. keep it up!

myshiningstar14 ( F P C ) at 2005-11-18

"NO one knew she was so frail, like a thin piece of lace!" i looove that line. And i also love..."her tears said it all, eh was her depression, when he pretended to fall." aww good job! keep up the talent! yippeee! xox LISSA

Fadedstar ( F C ) at 2005-11-19

Good poem!!! Likes it lotzz
Good work!!

broken&torturedsoul at 2005-11-19

I like it I feel the engery and the mood it's awesome.

Zoe Lee at 2005-11-19

WOW, awesome poem, you're a really great write...luvd it...keep it up =)

Amber at 2005-11-30

This is a very good poem although it is also very sad! I have a few friends who have wanted to commit suicide over a guy and it's the hardest thing to talk someone out of, but people need to know that it is not worth it! I do like this poem although I hope that it didn't really happen to someone you know.

Until the end.(¯`v´¯) ( F C D ) at 2005-12-07

I love the way you rhymed in this poem.
It shows how two emotions can mix into one.

Sarah Drew ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-21

Beautifully sad poem. There was so much emotion in this.

Kurmit-Chaya ( P C D ) at 2006-04-10

I loved this poem your a great writer keep it up 5/5

Sole ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-18

Again. I'm runnign out of things to say. Great work, it flowed really well and the rhyming was almost perfection. Keep it up!

Peace. [Sole]

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manzoor ( C ) at 2012-02-22

Hmm awesm