Comments - Blinded By A Player's Smile

obsessedgurl ( F C D ) at 2005-12-13

Hey i luv this poem. I can really relate to it. What really sucks is when you know u shouldn't like him but u still do... which it seems like u r going thru... (so am i) any way i like your rhymes, it flowed together nicely

>torn apart ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-13

Aww huni..i'm sorry if this is true. Dw he'll realise what he's misse dout on:P
much love xox

Tim Bradshaw ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-13

You sound like a wonderful person if this is truely meant to be then it will work out everything happens for a reason stay strong and most of all don't dwell on the past live your life

MaDdiSoN ( F P C ) at 2005-12-14

Omg huni i loved it!! soooo fukin good, i loved da emotion and everything in it, huni u r soo talented plz keep writing, every word that u write fills my heart with sorrow and or happiness, soo good i swear! luv u always hun, and dont worry i n o its hard now but da stupid playa doesnt deserve u, i no u r probably broken hearted but someone out ther will sweep u off ur feel and not break ur heart, hang in ther babe

Rican Chemistry ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-14

Girl I know how this feels...aint no piece of cake...lolz

This is a great poem like always. YOU are awesome!!!


ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ ( F P C D ) at 2005-12-14

This poem is sooo touching and i have to say that i loved each and every word of it...keep up the great job 5/5 u deserved it

aLoVeLiFeHuRtS(Jayma) ( F P C ) at 2005-12-14

Great poem i feel the same!!!!!!!!!!!!!

…°¤•*d0яα ( F C ) at 2005-12-17

0hh hun very heartfelt. g0od j0b expressin urself. very well written.
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

Paige ( F P C ) at 2005-12-19

Hey sweety that was an excellent poem i loved it! 5/5 i cant exactly say i can relate because i cant! but what i do know is what you must of been feeling at that time! because one of my friends have been in that situation before! and i seen what she went through and its not really good!
great poem Keep it ^ and keep the poems comming!
Love Paige
please look at some of my poems! iv made new ones! and if you wouldnt mind! please comment on them too!
love ya hun!

Romana Ana at 2005-12-31

This poem is really good =) ! kiss romana =D

kate at 2006-01-03

Thats soo good! i love it! i know how u feel..

Lila ( F C ) at 2006-01-06

This poem is exellent!!! wow thank you so much for commenting my poems! It really means a lot to me! ( : You are such a talented writer! I can't wait to read all of your poems!

SyNeR®©™2oo6 ( F C ) at 2006-01-08

Great poem ..kno what you mean.

Heather Griffith ( C ) at 2006-01-09

Another good Question!

*_Unloved at 2006-01-12

Great poem. it was so awsome

.::PuNk PrInCeSS::. ( F P C ) at 2006-01-22

This poem is mint!! i am going through that right now so confused!! love ur poems their all realli good....

PuNk PriNcEsS (LiSa)

nO1cOmPaReS2yOu ( F ) at 2006-02-11

I totally get this poem, just this month I went through the same expirence with a breakup. What made it even worse was that I'd been waiting for this guy for 2 years, & he ruined something that could have been beautiful. Keep up the good writing. You have an incredible talent.

◊ Atomic ◊ ( F C D ) at 2006-02-23

I don't like poetry that uses street lingo. In this case it was "player." it just ruin the whole perfect poem, however, I must agree with you that that word in particular was best used in this really does support the two lines:

"I didn't know it was a game
That only he had won...."

( )_( )
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Samantha klukas at 2006-03-15

I really liked this poem i read it and cried it reminds me of the relationship i just got out of i trusted him in tellin him what happend between me and my uncle and he threw it in my face he was playing me at that and my best friend told me he was cheating and she kept insisting on it but than soon to relize he was cheating on me alright he was cheating on me with my best freiend who smiled when i talked and cried when i cried about him....nice poem keep righting

JustLikeYouX ( F C ) at 2007-10-22

Really heartfelt.

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