Comments - My Greatest Fear

HOLLY ARMER ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-23

Beautiful! The flow is flawless and your words emit so much emotion.
Truly an awesome read! Take care~Holly

Bill Turner ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-23

Funny how, in the most loving of relationships the mind whips up self doubt. You have captured that spirit so well with this wonderful poem.

Bradley Peter ( F P C ) at 2006-01-24

Bloody brillaint love! its been a while since i've read one of your poems. iv got you on my favorites list yet i don't think i saw your poems coming up...which i kind of weird, lol. oh well, never mind. i'm getting off track. i felt this poem was great. i loved every stanza, which sadly means i couldn't pick a favorite one...sorry. the words flowed and the writing was extremly creative. i love the insecurity in it-the emotion. its a great story, and its brelliantly told. I can't wait for you next masterpiece


P.S. you may not remember me...but we have conversed poems before.

♥Angela♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-25

I think many of us can relate to this write....... lots of emotion in your words, beautifully written.

JJ ( F C D ) at 2006-01-26

"My greatest fear will always be
that will stop loving me"

^I'm sure so many of us can relate...I know I can... I guess in the end we find out, still I wish sometimes it were the other way around

terrific write! keep up the good work!

rar ( F C ) at 2006-01-29

Very good poem

Amanda at 2006-01-30


bharti ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-30

Awesome!!!!!! lovely!!!

i think this fear resides in hearts of all of us.
great write dear


Emma ( C ) at 2006-01-30

Wow this poem is beautiful
I can really relate
Hope everything is ok ,,,


Emma ( C ) at 2006-01-30

Wow this poem is beautiful
I can really relate
Hope everything is ok ,,,


Cuddles ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-30

So excellently written, Luanne! This is so wonderful. I can identify with your greatest fear. It's my greatest fear for me, too. I couldn't have written this better.

Johnnel at 2006-01-30

That was great!!!!!111

Kat at 2006-01-30

That was amazing i love it!!!

Phoebe ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-30

Great ^^

Moranda at 2006-01-30

This is an awesome poem and it really hits hard. A lot of us can relate to these feelings. keep up tha good work.

~*Rican Chemistry*~ ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-30

Hey Luanne, this was an awesome piece...very deep. I liked it a lot...Keep writting please, I love to read your stuff!!!


Diana ( F ) at 2006-01-30

Hey, i loved this poem!!!!!

Erika at 2006-01-31

I think that your poem was good

Danielle at 2006-01-31

I loved this poem. Everyone in love always has this feeling and you put it into words really good!

neens ( F P C ) at 2006-02-01

Luanne You have such an awesome talent. I love reading your poems. It has been a while. but I will rate and comment on as many as possible.

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