Jess ( P C )
at 2006-08-28
I like this poem, and know what u mean by the feelings u discuss. keep writing xx
Don Mills ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-28
Hey i didnt know you were goin out wit Yuri y didnt u tell me?well good poem i liked it ohh can u check out my new poems Plz thx...
♥BeautifulReality(Joc)♥ ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-30
Wow matt this poem is beautiful trully beautiful...I hope that Yuri read/reads this and gets the emotion and truth from is as I did...wonderful job....JOclyn
Lindsey
at 2006-08-30
Hey, this is such a beautiful poem This actually describes a situation I'm in with my boyfriend. So thanks and keep it up!!
◊•°รңคภ°•◊ ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-30
Sweet poem. Beautiful words. It's very heartfelt meaningful, and shows a lot of emotion. It rhymed really well and the flow was flawless.[5/5] Keep it up!
◊•°รңคภ°•◊ ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-30
Sweet poem. Beautiful words. It's very heartfelt meaningful, and shows a lot of emotion. It rhymed really well and the flow was flawless.[5/5] Keep it up!
angie
at 2006-08-31
I looove it!:)
JYOTI RANA ( F P C D )
at 2006-08-31
Nice piece
Static ( F C )
at 2006-08-31
Awww i can realte to this and it is so heart touching :$
Chesz™
at 2006-09-01
Wow,the feeling was intense..you made a good poem in here...great!
Dale Manczunski
at 2006-09-01
Nice poem, you can tell its from the heart.
Jules ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-01
Hey, great poem...I love how loose the rhyme scheme is! Keep it up.
(Can you tell me your secret for so many votes and comments? lol ;)
Thirupathi
at 2006-09-02
Superb.
ice "forgotten_phoenix" ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-03
Extremely true wish i had the guts to let the person know what i really feel yet i'm afraid of losing him if i let him him know...that's the feeling in here and you wrote preciely what i feel...love it so much!!!KEEP IT UP GREAT JOB!!! =)
ice "forgotten_phoenix" ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-03
What i mean is precisely...
Skylar
at 2006-09-03
I love your poems
♥Beautiful-Butterfly♥ ( F P C D )
at 2006-09-03
Aww thats a sweet poem!! great job
jennifer ( C )
at 2006-09-04
Dude. ur poem is amazing && a half. really really really good. i kno wat u mean 2. goodluck wit ur gf xoxoxo
jennifer ( C )
at 2006-09-04
Dude. ur poem is amazing && a half. really really really good. i kno wat u mean 2. goodluck wit ur gf xoxoxo
Cherakee
at 2006-09-04
Nyce poam i luv it its reall deep n touchn