Comments - I pray this will last.

misstress ( F C D ) at 2006-09-19

Interesting story,
You know how to put your emotions unto writing..
Good work!

Kim at 2006-09-19

Beautiful poem....i love the words.....hope you have more coming

Luna ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-19

Very nice. I love how there is a story behind it, and "real life" sort of feeling. Something that could happen and/or has happened to everyone.


Jpoet ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-19

Nice job...rhyme scheme was a little off, but overall i really enjoyed this poem. your a fav. of mine! Jpoet*

-*`d0ra ( F C ) at 2006-09-19

Beautifully written darl very well d0ne. keep it up xx

jessel jane ( P ) at 2006-09-20

Im totally speechless! What a nice poem to read... soothing...comforting... touching in a way one can never forget it's existence.Great job!

Marcus ( F C D ) at 2006-09-21

I liked it nice flow...alot of emotion put into it great job

LuvSuxGetDrunk ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-22

Wow...amazing. 5/5

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-22

A very passinate love poem that anyone in love can relate to

Deana ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-22

Beautiful poem, very romantic, sounds like it wasworth waiting for!

Brooke Amity ( C ) at 2006-09-23

I LOVE this poem.
everyone has felt this way and you put into words so perfectly.
Thank you!

Ashley Paul ( F P C D ) at 2006-09-23

Beautiful...just beautiful...keep it up. I could see it clearly happening in my head and it was so calming. I loved it.

crys at 2006-09-23

This really captures the moment, in the most easiest way. It's great! :]

Tara-Kay ( F C D ) at 2006-09-23

This poem was really really beautiful, it shows the love you share with someone, it shows the confusing of feelings, and it was absolutely awesome!

Elise Cregg at 2006-09-23

Awesome poem

Cadee at 2006-09-24

Oh my god i love your poem its amazing..its just soo touching in everyway its unbelievable

♥shyann♥ ( F P C ) at 2006-09-25

Very beautiful poem:)...keep up the good work your doing great!!5/5

~*Weeping Wolf*~ ( F P C ) at 2006-09-25

Amazing. I felt the very same way when i first fell in love. it is a beautiful thing. We all pray these things last...and hopefully they all will.

Lynzie ( P ) at 2006-09-25

So sweet and really petty too 5/5

JessicaK Loves JeffreyL Forever ( F C ) at 2006-09-25

Wow. . .that is a nice poem. . .I love it. . .Keep up the work. . .I LOVE THIS

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