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CharismaticCountryGirl ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-04

This was an amazing piece. Definitely one of your better recent ones. Just great!

Krzysztof J. ( F P C ) at 2006-12-05

Perhaps one day i'll have the strengh to right a poem like this, but for the moment im just fooing myself :)) fantastic write Gemma as always the more i read the more i am impresed by your words :)

End Of Eternity ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-05

U really got a very motivational message in this one...and i hope people understand this.

great write indeed

all the best and take care

Blaze ( D ) at 2006-12-05


mari ( F C D ) at 2006-12-05

You go girl....

pinklady at 2006-12-05


Layla. at 2006-12-06

You go girl. =D Magnificent.

Lynzie ( P ) at 2006-12-06

JOB well DONE i love the flow of the poem gurlie keep writin and you let him kno that he is JUST a guy and they cant bring you down stand tall gurl till you find the one worth fallin for *hugs* lynzie kae

Cassie ( F C D ) at 2006-12-06

Omg this poem i so awesome

loreto at 2006-12-07

I think this is a really good poem!! i'm really impresed it is awsome!! breath taking !

Lyndsay Kalyta ( F P C ) at 2006-12-07

Great poem! I wish I could write something that would get 100 votes! Congrats!

~#~tHe TeArS bEhInD tHe MaSk~#~ ( F C ) at 2006-12-07

I like this. ive had some guys that are like this and all i can say is hold your head up and put one foot forward at all times. good work!!

lilia ( F P C ) at 2006-12-07

That was a very powerful and also beautiful poem!! its great that you feel this way. i hope one day i can have this feeling also...5/5 keep it up

dariela at 2006-12-08

Nice poem
has alot of meaning
real nice :) 5/5

Keanna Hopkins ( C ) at 2006-12-08

Hey... i really like this. the strength and power behind it "saying that your okay and can move on" you go girl. nice poem!

mari ( F C D ) at 2006-12-09

You go girl....nice poem to encourage strength....after a heartbreak

Jessica at 2006-12-09

I think this was a very deep and meaningful poem. This is straight up what is going on. There is no BS in this. That is the way to get it done. This was great. Keep it up. Hatred and anger as well as TRUE love striken moments are what makes poems come alive.

Sourav ( F P C D ) at 2006-12-09

Sad poem with the positive note. Nicely written, well done.

Marcus ( F C D ) at 2006-12-09

I'm never going to hurt you, so this poem won't ever come true for you
Love you xx

Rania at 2006-12-09

Wow...i liked this one...:)

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