Comments - Key

kiara ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-08

Hey u must be on a role or something because you always seem to have a new poem lol
this one i must say is and always will be one of my favourites good job!

XOX___|Id|Die|For|You|___XOX ( F P C ) at 2007-01-09

I love this poem, you did a great job on it, thanx for all the comments on my poems 2, means heaps! keep writin, you rock!

heather ( C ) at 2007-01-09

Omg i love this poem really nice work. o and u said u were gunna write at least 1 poem a day?!?! dang boy that's a lot of poems! well keep up the raaaaaaaaaaad work bro

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-09

This is a really excellent write. You have done a great job I have really enjoyed the way you put the colors and meanings of the heart. What a excellent poem.

Rachel Barnett ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-09

Very unique. I like the metaphor.
I found a typo "no" should be "know"
Other than that, nice job.

Gasttlee ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-09

Thanks for that comment! I honestly needed it. I don't get that too often. So from deep down in my heart, thank you. And this poem of yours really moves me a lot. 5/5

Bryan ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-10

This is a very good poem david, great flow, i give it a 5/5!!!! keep it up, these are good!!!

яoиa ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-10

Excellent! I loved how you wrote this poem. I thought it was very well-written! And I loved the last stanza! Great job!

Tammie ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-10

This is beautiful. The storyline is clever, i've never read a poem on this topic, and you kept me interested the whole way through. The end wasn't what i was expecting, which i always like to see in a poem. Very unique. Keep it up. =] 5/5 Definately.


♥SoSickOfTears♥ ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-10

I loved this.
I thought it was beautifully written and I really enjoyed the flow and rhyme scheme.

Mandz ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-10

Nice poem i really like it 5 Mandz

Jenni ( F C D ) at 2007-01-12

Wow! I have never read a poem about a key, and if i were to read another I doubt it would be as good and descriptive as yours just was! wow! this is amazing! 5/5

Espoir*failed ( F P C D ) at 2007-01-13

This is excellent, i think i might have to steal ur idea of posting a poem a day! this poem uses a great extended metaphor. well done.

Hebe ( F P C ) at 2007-01-14

Seems from the heart. Really like it.

Barry... ( F C ) at 2007-01-17

Like the key and the different colours did you come up with this? Excellent David...thought provoking.....5

rhonda ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-02

This poem is good. i like it a lot/.

~Shae ( C ) at 2007-02-03

Wow...Nice poem. I love the depth to it. It fell together really well. The last part really got me! 5/5


NoniWang© ( F P C D ) at 2007-02-03

Beautiful job, I liked how you related it to a skeleton key. Keep it up

oksana at 2007-09-02

I really like this poem its really good !!! cheak mine out some time and commet them thanx!

Lace ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-01

I want to tell you you should have made a copy :P
this poem was amazing, i dont often read poems about they key to someones heart.
and i like how you gave so many examples of wondering what the key looked like. as if you didnt know.
great write

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