Comments - Magical kiss

Lyndsay Kalyta ( F P C ) at 2007-03-11

This is really cute:)

...rebeccaxX at 2007-03-20

Awesome..ur one of my fav writers on here

Jenie ( F P C ) at 2007-08-15

Wow this was awsome!!
i could picture it like a love scene in the movies
great work baby!

Aaron Deevers ( F P C ) at 2007-08-17

Very nice, was getting into the moment there for a second. 5/5

Hawtee Incorporated ( D ) at 2007-08-18

That is ahdorable :]

2BEEZIE4U ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-18

Omg this is soooo beautiful!!!!! makes me want to cry.. it took my breathe away!!!!

Sara ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-18

Looking in her eyes,
the feelings a bliss,
and every peck from her,
is a magical kiss....

aww soo cute! this is so much like my poem "sweetest kisses"... wow theyre a lot alike haha... great work! i liked this one too! 5/5 from mee

janiL at 2007-08-20

Nice.. Ã

kitkat girl ( F C ) at 2007-08-20

This is a really sweet poem. I like how you put the title in the ending line.

jojo88 ( F P C ) at 2007-08-20

Wow I love it 1000/1000

Jennifer ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-21

It's sweet. Rhyming in some areas is off but the imagery made up for it. I'll give it a four.

Kelsie ( C D ) at 2007-08-21

I like this poem because i can totally relate to it. i know how it feels. this poem is beautiful. 5/5

Kris ( P C ) at 2007-08-21


samantha ( F P C ) at 2007-08-22

Really good. i loved it! i liked this poem cuz it gives an idea on how guys feel when they're about to kiss someone they like. 5/5

kelly ( F P C ) at 2007-08-22

I love this...really good 5/5

PJ at 2007-08-25

Another Excellent Poem. I Love It

Riffy ( F C D ) at 2007-12-26

Awww this is so beautiful!
Made me smile :)
Well done!!

Jennifer Dziak ( F P C ) at 2008-02-15


cryNOmore at 2008-06-05

Wow I really enjoyed this poem it flows so smoothly.

grace ( F C ) at 2008-09-10

Ahhhhh sweet poem!! 5/5! =)

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