Comments - The Perfect Guy

PygmyPuff ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-17

This is a truly wonderful poem. I love how the first stanzas are stuffed full of details, yet it isnt nearly "cramped" or "thick". I love the reference to eyelashes. Thats someting I look at when I consider a guy. Kinda strange, but I do. That and scent. lol



BeautifullyxBroken ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-17

I loveee this poem too. it reminds me of this guy from a while back but he wasnt who i thought he was..but anyways wonderful poem. 5/5

LithiumSacrifice ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-17

*... wow basically covers it 5/5 you are really an excellent poet and really got the talent. The poem is sooo beautiful. I loved the way you could describe it and really capture the whole thing and about the eyelashes and such. wonderful. i loved the 1st stanza and then i *fell* in love with the last. haha


MiSsUnDeRsToOd TeArS ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-17

I really liked this poem. i think you did a fabulous job on it. I liked the words you used to describe him. it was just great.

If only I could describe everything about you.
I'd go on forever because it could never die.
All I know is that I have a love that is true.
Everything about you makes you the perfect guy.

I really liked this stanza the most. wonderful poem, 5/5 keep up the good work.

ItEndsWithUAndMe ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-17

I loved this poem the imagery of this perfect guy sparkled beautifully in my mind it was great. I loved the discription i think u did a wonderful job portraying it throughout this poem. beautifully penned piece of poetry you have here. Well done on a great job~mel

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-18

Wow!! the imagery was phenomanal (sp?)!! The words were sensational!! I love love loved this poem and I'm voting on it for best poem or whatever so nice job!

Nicole ( F P C ) at 2007-04-18

5/5 beautiful poem. it reminds me of the joys of love. well done this is a well written almost inspirational poem

WANNAbe Juliet ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-18

Tongue tied words that soar my wings to fly.
My favourite line . Detailed but not crowded . Really good imagery . It was beautiful . The ending just really wrapped the whole thing up .

goran ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-18

So great
so nicely written
so romantic

you have done another great job with your great talent. truly you are a talented writer and your poems are more done great.keep up the great work like always. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-19

Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes

tyanna ( C D ) at 2007-04-19

WOW!! Very good poem!! Very detailed yet not so much that a line is never ending and hard to take in.. Wonderful job! The flow and wording was extrodinary!! Keep writting!

Ashleigh Skye ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-19

Aw this poem is SOOO sweet I love it.. I think one of my favorite things about this is the way that you used a lot of metaphores throught the poem a lot of people dont use to many of them anymore or if they do they aren't as creative and make them something that can be overlooked, you however chose to go the way it should be done. The last stanza was one of my favorites, I definatly felt the happiness and love radiating from this peice, well done.

BitterSweet at 2007-04-19

I loved it! Great work. it was so sweet. I sent it to my friends it was so good. 5/5


lacey at 2007-04-19

I love this poem
it was great
perfect 5/5 score

Mohd Abbas at 2007-04-19

A beautiful piece. You are really good for your age

*~* broken soul *~* ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-20

Wow. very passionate. you have a way with words. great job. and thank you for the comments.

mel ( D ) at 2007-04-20

I really,really,really liked this poem and it was real what i mean is it come from the heart, most people write about love because they desire it but seems you have the real thing =) 5/5 really enjoyed reading it had good flow.....takecare mel xxx

i thought that poem was really touching oh yeah by the way im mels mate i really enjoyed reading your poem it really touched my heart it seems like you enjoy writing id really like to write my feelings into a poem but im thick lol any way take care sammy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxx :D

michelle at 2007-04-20

I love your poem!

Wallace ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-21

Very good poem, really enjoyed it, keep up the good work. Check on my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes

Dillon at 2007-04-21

Its a very well written poem I just dont like those kind of love poems

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