Comments - Paint a Smile

laycie ( F C ) at 2007-06-06

I really love this. It's goin on my faves deffinitely. Your wording is very strong and ur style of writing is 2. I love this soooo much!

Fire lilies ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-06

I liked it. It was an easy read and it had a great flow and good word choice. I gave it a 5/5.

Tammie ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-06

Love it. This is so good. The flow of it is absolutely flawless, and the rhyming didn't sound forced at all. There was much sadness in what you wrote, yet there was almost anger, or an emotion close to that at the end. That's what I felt anyway. A very enjoyable read. Well done. =] 5/5


Kristina ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-08

Wow this is so good. i really liked it a lot. and i'm glad a i read it. what a wonderful job you did on it. keep on writing 5/5


Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-10

Very sad piece you have penned. Excellent job!

But we lost touch
My hand slipped from yours
We went our ways
And closed open doors

I loved these lines.
Take Care Cindy

Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh! ( F C D ) at 2007-06-10

Tihs poem was amazing. I didn't think it was gonna end the way it did, though. But it was still great. Something I can relate to, too. Keep writing. 5/5

` Liz =]

Marian ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-11

A very poignant write... all the best and take care... ~Debbie

scarlett at 2007-06-11

One word..... beautiful!
i love how it all flows together


ice "forgotten_phoenix" ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-11

Wow bravo!!! absolutely beautiful very well written... i like this really. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

Sandy Figueroa at 2007-06-11

Bravo.. Exellent poem! it sounds almost like an oldie song.. 5/5

Jess ( P C ) at 2007-06-11

Brilliant! so sad but so meaningful, in a way i know how u feel, but through ur poem, anyone would know how u feel. xx

HiddenPoet ( F P ) at 2007-06-12

Wow! That poem is awesome, but the story is sad.

leanne at 2007-06-12

Wow! this poem has open my eyes

Audrey at 2007-06-12

This poem is pretty good.. I'm new here and this is the first one I've read and I'm glad I did.. It's Something I can relate to..
"I just can't bare
Another lost heart"
Keep up the good writing...

PwInCeSs Saz ( F C ) at 2007-06-12

OMG! its so gud and emotional! i luv the last four lines, they really clinch! things will get better huni.. just hang on in there!!

Angie at 2007-06-12

Wow that was great i really liked it

HisForeverIWillBe at 2007-06-12

This poems is really great i really liked it it made perfect sense

Elizabeth at 2007-06-12

Chris this is a great poem sounds like you really got hurt. love doesnt always suck though.

Angela at 2007-06-12

Its a really good poem you have lots of talent!!!!

Hidden Kiss ( F P C D ) at 2007-06-13

Yeah that is gorgeous i love how it rythmed and how it was so powerful in the way that you wrote it. The feeling reminded me of how i feel, how i have felt, sad - but gorgeous


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