Comments - As Soldiers Went Home

Corina at 2007-07-22

I lOve this peom, it REALLY Touched me =)

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-03

This is an outstanding poem and as a senior member I will vote it into the weekly contest.

Poetess Call Me GlenDuh ( F C D ) at 2007-08-03

A truly beautiful write. It doesn't look like the work of someone who just started writing. Lol. Love your use of words and expressions. Never stop writing! 5/5

` Liz =]

Brittany ( P C D ) at 2007-08-04

This is a gorgeous poem. I refuse to believe that you just started writing. You have wonderful imagery and description. YOU'RE a winner. Keep it up, you're AMAZING.

the mistake you wish you never m ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-07

Wow...that was so good.....i love it....

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-07

Congrats on the contest win....great write....well deserved win!

Mo ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-08

Absolutely magical! I loved it. Congratulations - it definitely is a masterful piece worthy of gracing the winner's top spot!

Loved the language you used and how you had to read right into the poem to get the meaning out of it. I do adore reading poems of love that goes beyond mortality.


BlueDreams ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-08

Congratulations on the contest win, awesome penned....! you deserved it more than ever you know....Best wishes.

Luzan with Nazeer ( F C ) at 2007-08-08

This pieve was absolutely an outstanding one. Your creativity is captivating...never a dull in writing and never dull in reading...

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-08

Congrats.....that was fast:) Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Luzan with Nazeer ( F C ) at 2007-08-13

OH itS a lovelY writinG...i prefeR mucH... thankS lol.....


ajda at 2007-08-13

Crazy words...great job

Bogie ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-14

Congratulations, no doubt!

This magical read took me on
a mind expanding visual
adventure to say the least.
Excellent work my friend,

Luzan with Nazeer ( F C ) at 2007-08-14

OncE agaiN.....

Aww, that'S a sweetTpoeM! I likE iT :)


NyellMoonlight ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-14

Great poem, every stanza is amazing. This piece holds so much emotions, and it's very deep. You have excellent wording in it, and the flow is good, too. The fourth stanza is my favorite.
Well done, 5/5 from me

Imogen ( F C D ) at 2007-08-15

This is an amazing and very touching poem with an inventive use of language to build meaning. I especially like the first stanza and the ending.


Luzan and Nazeer ( F C ) at 2007-08-16

Good job expressing in a better form. Keep writing.


maranda at 2007-08-16

Hi i am maranda and i love ur poe is is so sweet hay read mine and tell me what you think well great job o the poem

Luzan and Nazeer ( F C ) at 2007-08-18

Yet another sweet poem..... keep up the best writing as well as its expressions..


Luzan and Nazeer ( F C ) at 2007-08-19

ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.


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