Comments - Beseech The Night (Sonnet I)

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-24

Debbie
What a breathtaking Sonnet. Your words of love are stunning.


Your sweet caress my empty arms denied
Longing words fall to silent lonely cries
A poet's verse to quell the ebbing tide
Through lips bereft of whispered breaths and sighs

How I relate to this verse. Touches me heart so deeply.
~CLAP~CLAP~CLAP~
Love Cindy

M Douglas Hoss ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-24

That's just beautiful....

Twisted Heart ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-24

Deb,

What a beautiful sonnet. loved the word usage. Especially loved this stanza:

"Oh Love! beseech the night's divine intent
One last bequest of morning's perfect smile
Against thy breast a beating heart content
Embracing gentle comfort for a while"

Absolutely breathtaking. The imagery and flow was excellent.

Bravo, dear friend.

Always,
Jeannie

Barry ( F C ) at 2007-07-24

Poem speaks and plays melodies .........
stunningly beautiful.....

I wish i could find words to compliment what you have written.... mmmmmmmmmm

Poetess Call Me GlenDuh ( F C D ) at 2007-07-24

This is amazing. A truly beautiful, sincere and honest love poem. I've tried sonnets before, but yours is just incomparable. I'm at a loss for words. This is by far one of my favourite love poems on the site. Never stop writing. 5/5

` Liz =]

Marian ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-24

Wow! I was in awe reading this sonnet. It's absolutely beautiful. It was such a stunning success, Miss Debbie. For a moment, I was carried away by your words to another heavenly realm [of thought]. That's how breathtaking and compelling your words are. I hope you keep on writing what you feel and like. All the best and take care. Love, Debbie

BlueDreams ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-25

What a poems...My pleasure to read this Marvellous sonnet.. yet within Beautiful emotions penned you portrait here, one of beautiful sonnet i have read..... Well done!

"Longing words fall to silent lonely cries
A poet's verse to quell the ebbing tide"

Rachel ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-25

Isn't that special!

Rachel ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-26

What a compicatedly beautiful metaphors!

Rachel ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-26

I didn't mean to put an a in the above comment. I also wanted to add that I love the ending of the piece. Nice way to finish it off!

Barry ( F C ) at 2007-07-26

Perfect, absolutely breathtaking,amazing,
captivating........special beyond words......
as for the ending......well.......

You can find a dream and live it....

As for the poem?
The one that will run on and on.....
Very beautiful....beyond any words

audrey harris ( F C ) at 2007-07-27

Wow, wonderful poem! Meaningful, too. 5/5

chavii ( F C D ) at 2007-07-28

Amazing beauty this poem holds.Very heartfelt and deeply moving descriptions.Great poem .

Best Wishes
chavii.

Fsams ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-29

Debb your poem is flawless. You describe things in such a way the saliva oozes out for a while ;). The word choice is as always outstanding. God bless you dear

Tc
Fsams

Arun Khan ( F P C ) at 2007-07-29

You proably already know it.. this is brilliant.. Very amazing.. must say the way you play with words is infatuating..

ben thompson ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-04

Very nice. beautiful words. 5/5

Deana ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-05

I love sonnets,someday I`ve got to try one,this was superb,If I could do half this good I`d be happy. very touching.

Emma ( C ) at 2007-08-06

I love your writing style its beautiful 5/5

tazly ( C D ) at 2007-08-16

Wonderfull poem 5/5 ^_^

Luzan and Nazeer ( F C ) at 2007-08-20

WonderfuF poeM! MeaningfuL, toO. 5/5

LUZAn


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