Sarah ( F C D ) at 2007-08-13

This is a really Beautifully Written poem..great piece emotional..flawless..wonderful..well done
I give u 5/5 u deserve it!

cheyenne at 2007-08-14

Wow, this is a really great poem...i'm gonna let my lover read it, and see wat he thinks...good job!! 5/5

Megan ( P C ) at 2007-08-14

Awww that is so cute. very good. 5/5 keep it up.

Lauriel Chambers at 2007-08-14

I love it! The "not been told" part really surprised me! I love when poems do that!

PUNK GIRL ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-15

This was done really amazing...The flow was flawless...You have done an excellent job for this...Keep it up..
Take care

Sara ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-18

I wish I'd told you how much,
I love you, when you were in my hold.
It hurts so much that i have,
All this love for and you've not been told.

^loved that stanza, great work!... the flow was great, and so was the rhymingg.. 5/5 from me, and thank you so much for the comment... keep it upp!

AngelOfTheLights ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-18

That is really good I just love it a lot. My boyfriend likes it a lot too. We feel the same way we love eachother more than words can tell and speak. Nice truth to it. I really like it so keep up all the wonderful work that you have while writing your poems. I really love them just had to say again.

Brittany at 2007-08-19

I love this poem its so good.....i really shows true feelings when someone loves someone

Chloe at 2007-08-19

5/5 this was very well written- in otherwords, YOURE AN AWESOME POETESS!!! lol, its true tho:)

aMANDA ( F P ) at 2007-08-19

I love this poem... you did really well one it. your a great poet

Amy Hernandez at 2007-08-19

Nicely done.
Love has got to be the most confusing thing in the world the best and the hardest all at once

kacie hoose at 2007-09-09

I like this. its hard to tell someone you love them when that fear just washes up and drowns you. but a love not loved is a love lost... so which ever is the greater pain.

Zoe at 2007-09-27

This is a real nice well written...good job...

Rasheed Khokhar ( C ) at 2007-10-04

Great Peace of Work Done By You..
with the desires of real love.... I really like and enjoyed with your work....:) 5/5


Lacey Marie ( P ) at 2007-10-13

Oh my good Lord!! This is SO good, I love it!

Colourful Mind ( F C D ) at 2007-11-04

This is so lovely so strong so much power i loved reading this and the flow is just great read more like this x

waiting 4 some1 ( F P C D ) at 2007-12-20

One of the most beautiful poems i have ever read...very wonderful i can describe its beauty...
he is so lucky to have an intellegent poet as a lover

Kenny ( P ) at 2008-02-05

Love this poem ;))