Comments - I WISH*

Norbert ( F ) at 2007-08-19

This is a really good poem. I like how you use yourself as your love's accessories.
Keep up with these kind of poems.

2BEEZIE4U ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-19

Wow i really love this poem!!!!80/80

Chelsey ( F C D ) at 2007-08-19

This is a very good poem.

Teen>Love>Tragedy ( F C D ) at 2007-08-20

You are an amazing writer..i really like all of your poems. good job, 5/5

xXBrokenInsideXx ( F P ) at 2007-08-20

Aww that is so sweet i wish i could write like that i loved it 10/10 great job

Love You Take Care

~Love Always Jess~

broker ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-20


5/5 Ingrid

kia ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-20

You were right i did like this poem. Very sweet. Well written. 5/5 :)

kitkat girl ( F C ) at 2007-08-20

This is a really cute poem. I really like the stanza where you wish you could be her mirror, it was really clever.
keep it up.

jojo88 ( F P C ) at 2007-08-20

Hi it nice to now that a guy like ur self reads my poems and this poem I wish It great I loved it I read ur others poems and ur rilly into ur feelings I love that in a guy not meany r like these day well thanks for comenting on my poem 100.100 for me

BabblingxoBrooke ( F P C ) at 2007-08-20

Like i said you have pure talent and this poem is amazing! I cant pick a favorite part because i love it all...FANTASTIC!

Jenie ( F P C ) at 2007-08-20

Omg paul! i dont get it...u c so much more when u write! u write on such a whole other level then anyone ive ever seen or read! so creative i sware!!
i really liked this one..
maybe add some more to it..keep it goen :)


not-so-pretty-{bleeding}- ( F ) at 2007-08-21

This is amazing!
You're very talented!

Jennifer ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-21

Oh I love it! If it's a true poem that is a lucky girl. :) If she saw it she must have thought it was very sweet. It's a five even though there are some parts where the rhyme is off. You are one of the rare cases where I love a love poem and get away with a few off rhymes. Congrats! Trust me I'm picky, so getting a five on a love poem from me is like god saying he's your best friend. :) I'm going to add it to my favorite poems which I have none of here at the moment.

Marijuana ( F P C ) at 2007-08-21

Why thank u very much! I love this poem it's great!

missin him ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-21

Really good poem sweetie it was full of meaning 5/5 for sure <33

Kelsie ( C D ) at 2007-08-21

I really like this poem. i like the style that you wrote it in, i think you wrote it beautifully and it has a lot of meaning. it gave me goose bumps. 5/5

kelly ( F P C ) at 2007-08-21

Very well done like it alot 5/5

*Charisma* ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-21

Awww.... I did like this poem! Thanks for commenting on mine! I'd think this would be cheesy, but it wasn't. Instead it was incredibly romantic and intimate and full of love and emotion! I mean, this was beautiful...wish this was for me! lol !

ali ( F C ) at 2007-08-21

Wow that was just wow
soo sweet and so tender the way you write is so natural and its an awesome piece of writing, very jealous of your talent haha!!!!
loved it!! 5/5

Sara ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-21

I wish i was your eye liner,
in your eyes id be,
finally theres a moment,
where all you see is me,

^ i lovedd that stanza, just like the rest of the poemm... great workk, and keep it upp.. 5/5 from mee

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