Comments - Questions crossing my mind

kimberly at 2007-10-05

You know I really like what you did with this poem. I love how you asked one little question and got so many good answers. I think this just might be my favorite poem right now. I would like to keep reading more of your poems so keep writing. that poem really got me thinking and when I read it i kind of felt some think so good job.

Cyma Khan ( F P C ) at 2007-10-05

Its a great write.Very important questions n wth simple answers.Keep up the good work.
God bless u

gIrL ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-11

U really define the true meaning of love n u have never treid it before
u rally have a great talent inside just keep on writin u might end up bein a great writer someday

keep it up 5/5


Salwa ( F P ) at 2007-10-16

Breathtaking words on the meaning of love..............its beautiful, and written with such honesty about deep, personal questions..........

i hope everyone gets the chance to read this.........and if YOU, yourself have it, again.


broker ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-24

Love is many things....but most of all it is a joy in our heart. It is the one thing that makes life worth living.

Beautiful poem by you.

Best wishes,

5/5 Ingrid

broker ( F P C D ) at 2007-10-24

Oh, forgot to tell you: check out my poem called 'the meaning of the word love' I think you will like it very much. You will find your answer there.

Este es el momento adecuado para ( F C ) at 2007-11-01

Woow that was a really good poem. I really injoyed reading that poem. Its very deep and shows your true feelings and how you really feel about love, 5/5

anubis ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-05

You write very full on and I think thats a good thing because it allows us to see into you and feel there is a truth behind the words you write. It felt like there was feeling in this not just words

Elysia ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-11

Beautiful absolutly beauitful i love that poem... words cant describe how much i love that poem... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

Dark Secrets ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-21

*applause* wow... this is a great piece... nice contadiction between the lines... thumbs up

SweeT pOisOn ( D ) at 2008-02-05

Wow....simply...they r really some hard questions to ans...keep up the good work!!!

WHYmePlzExplain at 2008-02-10

Many questions i ask myself throughout the day....

XxRussian Roullete ChampionxX at 2008-02-11

*sigh* that was great...i think alot of people can read that and relate; i know i canâ¥

Michelle ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-15

Nice poem
the questions were different
but you did a great job

Coldstone ( C D ) at 2008-05-03

Truly amazing!... i agree with u on:
If it's true then why do people fall in love?
Why do people call it a gift from above?
I kept thinking that love is a horrible tool
People use it to punish others, love is cruel
hey iam also adding u on my fav.
Wish u more talent:)

Bella ( F P C ) at 2008-05-28

Amazing !! Great poem, every single word you wrote was just perfect.

And love is all that, it is the magic but also the heartache.
It can make you "fall to your knees and cry" but at the same time "restore your life and give you wings to fly".
People also cant help falling in love it just happens, its incontrollable.

Anyway its a beautiful piece def. one of my favorites. Great writing, wish you the best.

Crystal ( F P ) at 2008-06-04

That poem is so true both sides are right you just need to be really careful with your feelings tho dont leave them hangin on the line just to have the bad side of love destroy your heart coz once its shattered you cant glue it back together in just a couple of days... it takes longer... i should know.

JYOTI RANA ( F P C D ) at 2008-06-10

I don't know why people keep try to describ love. If you are in love no matter you get sorrow or happiness, heaven/hell. If you are in love you have to accept both. in the way of love you will get flowers and throun and you have to walk both of them. If you can't do this, please don't fall in love.

bye keep smile

Lil Ally Kat ( F P C D ) at 2008-07-04

And trust me, when you are in love it is a great and wonderful thing. And yes it can hurt but it can make you stronger in many ways. But don't get confused with other kind of levels of love that are out there in the big scary yet wonderful world....

And don't worry.... You're not alone!!!