Comments - I Love You More

love ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-11

Very nice poem!!!!! I feel the exact same way!!!!


tania at 2008-01-11

Ur poem is HELLA good!!!!

xxTaegan Emilyxx ( C D ) at 2008-01-12

Naw. that was so cute. I love it good choice of words to show and very well written. Over all a very beautiful poem
Taegan Emily

mOnStRiToS pRiNcEsS ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-12

Now this was such a precious poem. It shows a lot of feeling and I can relate to it with my fiance. I wrote something like this a while back. It's a really cool poem. I loved it!!


Knee Deep In Emotions ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-12

I loved the idea although the I'll thing is kind of overused. The idea and emotions behind it were beautiful.

"I'll talk you hand, and follow as I lead"

I think you meant I'll take your hand.
Maybe it's just me, but yeah.

Also, the last two lines of the poem were beautiful. I loved it. It really summed up the peice perfectly and were my favorite lines of the whole peice. Great job. 5.5

Amber :]]

cassandra ( C D ) at 2008-01-14

I love the last bit

"I'll be here for you when you say what I've waited for
I'll kiss your lips and say, "I love you more"

your poetry is so nice i really enjoyed reading this one.

loveislife ( F P C ) at 2008-01-17

My two favourite parts..especially the second one..i can totally relate to that feeling of wanting to always be there for your guy no matter what and wanting to hear him say i love you. simply amazing poem i love it...message me sometime lol :p

"I'll be here for you when you start to fall apart
I'll hug you and help you to follow your heart"

"I'll be here for you when you say what I've waited for
I'll kiss your lips and say, "I love you more"

kimberly ( F ) at 2008-02-04

Good Job Great Poem

DarkSpirit ( F C D ) at 2008-02-07

I don't like repetition of -I'll be here- it isn't effective and the fact that you started every line with that words left a truly negative impression on me.
That is just my opinion of course, I don't want to offend you but I don't like at all the rhythm that you created with that repetition. All in all I don't like choice of words too much but this piece is sweet and filled with amount of emotions.

IfYouWantMe ( F C ) at 2008-02-11


Tabitha Jean Vance ( F ) at 2008-02-26

I love this poem i feel the same way about my boyfriend it is great when you have someone that can make you feel this way great work 5/5

reina ( P C ) at 2008-03-01

Heres something i can show all my friends this is a really good poem and it matches alot of what me and my friend charlie kinda have cause we were more then just something then i turned out to be one of his best friends!id like to read more of what you got!

Christopher ( F C ) at 2008-03-27

I enjoyed this poem. There was a load of repitition, but it was used effectively to portray how you are feeling. I just started reading and writting poetry and have problems expressing myself in the written word. It's always great to see talent and a unique write. Some people just don't like difference, but I adore it. Good job 5

XxAshleyxX ( F P C D ) at 2008-04-03

I feel the exact same way about my boyfriend!
like ive said are an amazing and talented writer!
5/5 most def.