Comments - Wait For You

WilTED ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-16

Awe a very sweet poem.
and a beautiful write.
the rhyme was perfect and the flow
was almost flawless. :]
a great write. 5/5.

cassandra ( C D ) at 2008-01-16

I'd wait for you until I die.

that is the most sweetest line in this poem
i think its amazing last line always sends someone of thinking. xxxxx

Sweet lig ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-16

Wow that was filled of lovely words and it was so sweet! the message was actually powerful and very worded.. seems really sincere and perfectly well express 5/5

Infected with His Deadly Love ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-16

Good poem.
It flowed well and the imagery was clear.
Good job 5/5

coolest loser ever ( F C D ) at 2008-01-16

Aww that was soo cute. it sounds a little like middleschool love. "id wait for you untill i die" was the most touching part in it i think.
5/5 !props!

JustLIkeCandi ( F C D ) at 2008-01-17

"My heart is yours to have and hold.
You make me feel so good inside.
I'd wait for you until I die" I think this part is so sweet...i love this poem!..=)5/5

AblissfulDREAMER ( F C D ) at 2008-01-17

I could relate with the emotions you describe here. There is a certain someone I thought of while reading this and I'm certain I would wait for them also.

"I worked so hard to win your heart.
But you had mine right from the start."
^so true for me .. well said.


Sweet Fragility ( F C D ) at 2008-01-18

Very relatable piece. I love the way you ended it (the last line's my fave) because it's important to leave a lasting impression on the reader, you know? Very sweet. Great job. 5/5

Idiosyncratic ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-18

For once, I can honestly say I don't think there is any way to improve this way. Each time the rhythm seemed a bit off, I reread it and it was fine. Very, very well written and I love the word choice. 5/5.

David ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-18

Oh the love in this poem was fantastic, your description and word choice was amazing, full credit to you, this was a magic piece, you sure have talent.

5/5 David

mandy at 2008-01-18

That was a good poem. it seems like it was made for me and my boyfriend who in the war in iran.

islam at 2008-01-18

Awsome soo Awsome i cant say more cuz if i'll I Won't Give u the right describtion
Awsome 10/10

chantelle at 2008-01-18

That was the cutest poem i have ever read i loved kinda reminded me about the way i feel for this guy who isnt ready for a relationship...but ya newho i realli enjoyed readin this poem it was amazing

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Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-19

Wonderful job
this poem is amazing
you've outdone yourself
it relates close to home for me
so I really really enjoyed it
plz keep writing

kati ( F C D ) at 2008-01-19

This is so beautiful =)

frequent lover at 2008-01-19

Wow hun if they don't wait i sure will
I can totally feel this poem i love it

Kairi Kioku ( P ) at 2008-01-19

Awww, this is so sweet!!!!
This made me have a warm feeling in my heart ... awwwwwwwww *infinity aww*

xXxemzxXx ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-19

Great poem, theres so much emotion within the words i love it 5/5 :) keep up the good writing

sexyproudmommy ( F P C D ) at 2008-01-19

Aww, this is a very sweet poem. it kept my intrest through the whole thing. the flow was perfect also. i didnt see anthing wrong with this amazing piece. 5/5

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