Comments - How Could I Ever Leave You ( Collab)

End Of Eternity ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-05


Would have given up my life for you
You vowed that you would never leave
Yet here I am so cold and alone
Your words of love I always believed

I know from where this came.
I really feel great after every collab that we do, You are certainly a great soul i have ever met. I hope we keep this up.

All the best and take care
Thanks a ton for everything

David ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-05

Oh well done. this was an amazing poem! both of you! the wording and ammount of love in this poem was superb.

5/5 David

Twisted Heart ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-05

Cindy and End of Eternity,

You have penned a beautiful write. The devestation of which you wrote this, shows in every verse... every line. To know that kind of love and loss is one that I,, too, can relate with. It's the most heartwrenching feeling one could ever experience.

You two did an exceptional job on this... Bravo.


Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh! ( F C D ) at 2007-04-05

As I said to Nitin, this poem was completely mind blowing. I fell in love with it. ;p I tried picking my favourite stanza, but the whole poem is just amazing. I love every line of it. Never stop writing!

` Liz

chavii ( F C D ) at 2007-04-05

Amazing great write , wonderful job by you two.You two are great team.

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-05

Nicely written collab once again....can't pick a fav it all! 5/5 Debbie

*Gem* ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-06

"Waiting for you with open arms
How could I ever leave you
Always needed you here with me
To our love I'll always be true"

Beautiful! Simply beautiful!
When you two do a collab, i already know it's going to be a diamond!!
And i'm never disappointed =)

Gasttlee ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-07

Lovely written and expressed! 5/5

Gasttlee ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-07

I really appreciate your last comments. Thank you!

ben thompson ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-08

This poem by you and End Of Eternity Is really great. Hope you guys write many more of these pieces. Keep up the good work.
Nice to see you happy.

amanda flood ( C ) at 2007-04-08

Wow that was truely excellent very sad,sorry you lost your love.hope one day you will be reunited again.
all in all excellent

please if u hav time i would really like if u could comment on one of my poems only writting short time your say would mean a lot thank you

Lithium ( F P C ) at 2007-04-10

Great poem, i love the idea of the midnight train thats really cool, your words as always have an impact on my emotions as they are so deep and heartfelt, another wonderful poem .

Romantic Lover ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-11

"Waiting for you with open arms
How could I ever leave you
Always needed you here with me
To our love I'll always be true"

This stanza was my favorite. This was an excellent collab and so heartwarming.

Rachel ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-11

Very nice collaboration. It is nice to see styles mesh in these type writes. Full of emotion.

Barry ( F C ) at 2007-04-11

Beautifully written by you both...styles do mesh and bring something else with it.....
I could not pick out one verse the whole poem was so good........

Nicole ( F P C ) at 2007-04-18

5/5 simply beautiful poem. never a truer word spoken. i'm able to relate to everything you've written. well done your poem is amazing.

forever in love ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-01

Waiting for you with open arms
How could I ever leave you

i am nominated this poem as a contest . i am giving my vote as a senior memebr. its so nice work. i loved the every word of this poem. good expression. its my first vote for contest to anyone as a senoir memeber.
i loved the work you both had done in this poem.
take care.

N M Lambert ( F C ) at 2007-05-06

This is such a fantastically well penned poem... it has everything. great imagry and heartbreak... ur pain is plain to see. enjoyed reading this, thanks x

debbylyn ( F P C D ) at 2007-05-06

Congrats Cindy and Nitin! This is an excellent collab and well deserving of winning the weekly contest!

Lawrence Suell at 2007-05-07

God that hurts and yet it is beautiful!
L. Suell

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