Comments - Priceless Occasion

lexie ( P C D ) at 2007-07-03

Wow,what a really honest poem.but its always good that way.beautifully done.
one of those poems that really makes a person think.
thanks again for commenting. =]


Go Orlando ( F C D ) at 2007-07-03

Beautiful poem. You started and ended your poem well. :)
And the emotion on this poem is powerful.
And the rhythm between 2nd and 4th line in every stanza is a plus point... :)
Well done.

*Charisma* ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-03

Okay...each of your poems are so well thought out and have such an inspirational message. That's what I enjoy about them! I enjoy poets who really think it through and pour it out! My fave lines are

"Who says you have to throw away the memories,
That you were clearly meant to keep?"

Great job! 5/5

Live WeLL ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-04

Wow this is great.. you really make a good point with the questions you ask.. how simple things can just change someone and certain things they once believed it.. excellent job.. i really enjoyed it.. 5/5.. and thanks for the comment =]

Lozbi ( F C D ) at 2007-07-04

Your poems make me think alot. i think this poem is sending people a message, like we all need to wake up to ourselves. once again this poem really made me think. i'm really liking what ive read of your work so far. =]

Lozbi ( F C D ) at 2007-07-04

Hmmm.. i dont really know what to say about this poem except it was just wonderful. couldnt have been done better

M Douglas Hoss ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-04

Well done mindy....everyone should feel this way and learn from experiences...not carry bagage

Stephanie Naylor ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-04

That was nicely done, I really liked it, Your rhyming was flawless and didnt seem forced and it flowed perfectly,5/5

NyellMoonlight ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-04

Great one, you asked very important questions in it. I like its flow and the wording is excellent.
Well done, good job, 5/5

xkelsiex ( F C ) at 2007-07-05

Great job.i liked the flow and everything else about the poem.

david ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-05

Awesome poem, a strong feeling packed into a great poem. incredible.

your servant:

Finalgravedigger ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-06

I cant exactly agree with your poem but i loved the voice i heard in this poem 5/5

Marc Ortiz ( F P C D ) at 2007-07-06

Hey Mindy :)

This was a well penned poem, Flow was flawless, the word choice really fits the poem. Well done

How do you hate someone you once loved,
When you promised them forever?
^^ I really love those two lines.. It reminded me of someone..

5/5 as always!

cj at 2007-07-07

That was a very strong and good poem

Jessica B ( D ) at 2007-07-07

I love it !
i dont love many poems bbut i love this one
AMAZING writer !

Endymion† at 2007-07-08

Perfect... smooth. The meaning for me is correct, why wont people think of it that way... you have a great mind.
keep up the good work
this is a, not good.., it was great poem

cheers. ^^

kellymarie at 2007-07-09

Thankyou, what a positive and wonderful way to think,,, how right you are...

Janine at 2007-07-10

Beautiful. It was well thought out, and I love the optimism in this. SO many people look towards the negative at the end of a relationship; a love lost, and they don't seem to want to look at the beauty in it. I think the flow was beautiful, and the words were nicely chosen. Fab job.

Cody Cunningham ( F D ) at 2007-07-11

Hey, I liked this poem, really had feeling. It put me in a place of feeling. Also when I got on here I read your message on of about you. Honestly, I like it, lol, no joke. I thought it was and well you get to the point, you don't care what people think, and I feel the same way. Ight well later Message me back some. Name's Cody Cunningham or CJ. Ight well later

Kaila ( F P C D ) at 2007-08-02

Very very good
i agree completly
nice work

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