Comments - How Could You

Matt L at 2008-04-14

Love the poem

i know a guy who does the same kinda thing, they are not worth nothing...not much going on in there heads

keep writing


lOvE hUrTs at 2008-04-15

Love the peom! Good job!

Alex at 2008-04-19

Wow i love this.
its great.

me just you ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-04

How can you act,
Like we've never loved at all?
While I'm at home wishing you'd call.

felt that : /
listen to the song "how could you" by mario
youll love it!

5/5 <33

emily at 2008-05-18

A complete stranger
Now gets to hold my whole world.

I love that part. excellent writing. I like your use of repetition :) Beautiful job!

Heart Break Kid ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-18

Wow this poem is really good i love it

you are a really great poet
better then me

Danny ( F P C D ) at 2008-05-23

Ugh, I have totally felt this way before! It sucks! Actually, that is quite the understatement lol

But on the bright side, I love this poem! I especially love the first stanza. The emotion is so strong how you've written it.

I think it is incredible that you can express yourself so well. Not too many people can do it this well so feel special!

haha Poems like this are why i love this website!


My Paper Heart ( F P ) at 2008-05-26

Really nice, I liked this one a lot! Great job!

HuRtAnDpAiN at 2008-06-11

Wow i'm speechless. keep it up

LittleMsPink ( F P C D ) at 2012-10-01

Sad yet a beautiful poem :) <3

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