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Shattered Dreams ( F P C ) at 2009-03-21

Aww, this was a very good poem, i loved the rhyming and flow of the poem. great job

kevin boundy ( F P C D ) at 2009-03-25

That was definitely an incredible write! great structure, great flow, great emotion, great wording, and the tone was perfect 5/5

Dead People Dont Die ( F P C D ) at 2009-06-06

I like it. Try to be less obvious with your rhymes though. Face and replace rhyme but it makes it obvious. Face and ways don't rhyme but they sound so much alike. It's a pseudo rhyme.

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