Comments - What you are to me

Logan Rudolph ( F ) at 2006-05-29

Wow randy u do it so much better than me im glad to see u doing that because to me its like u saying u agree with how ive arranged my poems and means alot to me thanks!

goran ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-12

Hmmmmmm, great poem,
it is one of the great romance poem, you have done a great job here, you deserve a 5/5 in it.
keep the great job up

♥ Jєѕѕу ♥ ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-13

Awww! this was very very sweet.. i loved it! the imagery and emotion was beautiful.. it really made me smile.. i just found the flow a little awkward.. some of your rhymes didn't fit quite right or i felt like you were missing words in your lines.. other than that, excellent job! 5/5

Angel ( F C D ) at 2006-08-13

Nicely done! i loved the last stanza because it was only then i realized the first letters of your poem... beautiful job! keep writing!


Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-09

I am impressed. Excellent flow delivering beautiful imagery

xXBurninxDesireXx ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-10

Tender eyes of Sapphire
Hair as pure as gold
Everything about you fits gods perfect mold

^awww... very sweet and beautiful . nice flow as well.

Passionate and perfect
Essence of a rose

^My favorite part. it just stand out to me.

Rivers run ramped rearing
For the ground that you have chose
Earthquakes e'er endure the
Casual calming you impose
Time turns totally timid and in your wake it slows

^hmmm... a bit confusing in the end here.

With every first letter of this poem
I express what you are to me
Forever, now, and for all

^oh wow thatz awesome. you spelled perfect. i was like readin this part over n over again what u were tryin to say n my mind is slow i berly got it now. thatz prettie kool. n amazing. i like it.

TaKe CaRe,

Chris Loves Caro ( F P C D ) at 2009-04-14

Wonderful! The selection of words were perfect. I can bet that everyone understands the message behind it. Well done!

Em ( F P C D ) at 2009-11-10

Again another beautiful and emotional poem by you. Well written, 5/5. Em

mello193 ( F P C D ) at 2012-02-29

Really sweet. whomever this was to is very lucky to have such a beautiful thing written about them!

Everlasting ( F C D ) at 2012-05-23

I like your love poems, they are sweet.

Lofallenve ( F P C D ) at 2012-05-24

Sneaky sneaky. I never noticed it was an acrostic until you pointed it out! Loved it!!

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