Comments - Growing Old With You

Nz0 ( F C D ) at 2008-09-17

Fantastic write, i loved the last stanza; the flow was good too. i think with a lil more intricate wording, this could b a favorite =)

Kimeko Lancaster ( C ) at 2008-09-17

Beautiful!!!! Im in tears.... a love that one day I wish I will have

♥shyann♥ ( F P C ) at 2008-09-17

This poem brought tears to my eyes beautifully expressed ... i wouldnt change anything about this poem. definetly added to my favourites:)

RebeccaSarah ( F C D ) at 2008-09-17

I'm abesolutely speechless..
5/5 definetly,
keep it up.

lili says i aint giving him the ( F C ) at 2008-09-17

Words can never express how amazing his poem is,seriously am speechless:):):)
keep it up prince;)

ReBecca ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-18

OMG. This made me cry, and I usually hate love poems. This was beautiful, what we all dream of and want ( though not always necessarily with a man, sometimes it is a person of the same sex for some of us). Beautiful, simply beautiful.

xXx..AimZz..xXx--[x]--____ღ♥ at 2008-09-19

Cute =)

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-21

What a beautiful story put to verse. Brings smile and tears to the reader. True love is very rare but if you have it you are truely blessed.
Great job!
Take Care

Sylvia ( F P C D ) at 2008-09-25

A lump in my throat and tears in my eyes as I read this. You wrote the story of my parents. Thank you for this excellent poem.

James at 2008-09-30


Sara ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-01

Aww babyy, that was soo cutee :) it made me smile soo much... like this is how i picture and pictured our life from day one until now, and itll be amazing to watch it unfold before our eyes

obviously the flow was amazing as always :p, it was so happy and cheerful like our lives, but then it got really sad when 'the man" got diagnosed with cancer. obviously theres an ending to every happy story, but its just really sad to think about losing you or you losing me, because we wont be the same after each other is gone, and that whole part about how quickly someone can get cancer or ill should show you to seize every opportunity before its too late.

the last line about how his dreams came true because he grew old with his wife was sooo damn cute :) "He kissed her forehead and with his final breath, Said "Of course princess, I grew old with you."..... the poem went from me smiling soo hard to me with my sad eyes on and then at the last line my eyes started to water no lie... its amazing when within a few stanzas a writer can make you feel in love, feel pain, and then make you want to cry because the ending was so well thought out and amazing

i also loved how you used the whole big brown eyes and tears line as both the happiest emotion when he asked her to marry him and then in the saddest, when her love was going to die

your such a great writer baby, keep writing, and ill keep reading :) i love you soooo much :D

Sara ( F P C D ) at 2008-10-01

Ps- 5/5 haha :) <3

Hopelessly Devoted to You ( F P ) at 2008-10-28

U made my eyes water!!! but its ok i LOVED this one, great job!

christine ( C ) at 2008-11-02

that made me cry.. lol
its great.
i absolutely love it :]

kelleyana ( F P C D ) at 2008-12-12

Waw, this is the best poem i've ever red, It's breathtaking, tears came from my eyes. I'm speechless, all i can say, wonderful. It merits 5/5, kel

Strawberry Lemon ( F P C ) at 2009-01-03

Awww amazing poem! Really touching and sweet, 5/5

udontwannaknow ( F P C ) at 2009-02-10

OOh, I love the poem so much,,
its the sweetest I've read !

sweet simple and nice !!

keep up, i wish u and ur love d best..

Mr Rhee ( F P C ) at 2009-11-20

This is so good. So powerful. You have wonderful thoughts about love, and the bonds that hold lovers together. True, not all things are perfect, or forever, but love will always endure the tests of time. Your Sara is on lucky girl. Good luck, and thanks.

BraidhairCutie ( C ) at 2009-12-09

Very touching.

Stephen ( F P C D ) at 2010-03-10

Such a great poem, almost made me cry 5\5!!

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