Comments - For you..

lifes big mistake ( F C D ) at 2005-04-19

thats really sweet and well written xxx

Rachel E F Allen ( F C D ) at 2005-04-19

I liked it honey - good piece of work xx

ღReticent Soulღ ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-19

No offense, my darling, it just seems like your rhymes were too easy and simple minded. I think you are capable of much more. The flow was nice but poetry is not all about that. Keep trying. I'm no one to judge.


ps. no vote. I'd rather tell you than vote you down.

God bless you.

Jessica at 2005-04-20

this poem is beautiful

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-24

beautiful poem of feelings and honest emotions

katie! ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-24

I've already commented but it improves with each reading, well done once again, keep writing

metuka at 2005-04-25

I liked it a lot! You have it, girl... :)

*liZ* ( F C D ) at 2005-04-28

wow this is really good 5/5

Line ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-28

Exellent poem. I like the way you wright.

Oddyball ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-28

For being 15 you write really well. It was another wonderful poem. Please keep at it, it's good to see such lovely poems.

Michael D Nalley ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

a very touching poem filled with emotion and desire

Fireflower ( F P C D ) at 2005-04-30

awww.. breakups are hell.... but you'll get better. great poem though! you must keep writing! you're like... a really good writer!

katie at 2005-04-30

i loved the ups and downs of this poem, like an emotional rollercoaster just like love i also like how it was a story but still poetic, high five on this one hun

Shy ( F C D ) at 2005-05-03

i like it alot keep up the good work

a.newlun ( F ) at 2006-03-20

Amazing poem

unspoken dream ( F C D ) at 2010-08-10

Awesum poem ...dats d true love ..

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